Question

英语高手来答：今天上午做的事今天下午提到时，用过去式吗？ 如不是，帮下个日记修改：

a happy day
today is sunny. i go to my grandmother's family.in grangdmother's family,i see a rabbit. it has write fur. two long ears. it is beautiful. i play with that,jump,run......i'm
happy!
in the afternoon. we go home. i with my best friend Li Li to go shopping.we buy
books,pens and snacks.
today is fun!

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不是叫你翻译，是在英语的原文上修改哦！

Answer 1

用过去式.
This day was sunny. I went to my grandma's home. In her house, I saw a rabbit. It had white fur and two long ears. It was beautiful. I played with it, and we jumped and ran together. I was happy!
In the afternoon I went home. I went shopping with my best friend Li Li. We bought books, pens, and snacks.
I had fun today!

Answer 2

一个快乐的日子
今天是阳光普照。我去我奶奶的family.in grangdmother的家庭，我看到一只兔子。它具有写皮毛。两个长耳朵。它是美丽的。我和那部戏，跳，我跑......
快乐！
在下午进行。我们回家。我最好的朋友黎哩我买去shopping.we
书籍，钢笔和小吃。
今天是有趣的