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这是我自己写的，请大家帮我改下语法上面的错误把

Hello,everyone,I am very pleased to introduce my work which is named for 《maze in mind》.It produced by Photoshop.Maybe you can think of it's name through the screen。Head has a maze which like human thought.What an Innovative ideas ! It is not only difficult in technique, but must pay more patience if you want to do it well.Because the details of the characterization are very difficult.So you must have patience and circumspection instead of advanced techniques. A work is good or not , it depending on how to select and use the materials.That's why I spent a lot of time to select the materials.It is well-known method of image synthesis which need to merge the material.Then I use the Hue and Saturation tool to adjust the picture's color so that it looks full of color change.However,that is easier said than done because I faced many problem in actual operation during that time.I will feel a great sense of accomplishment when I overcome a problem.In my opinion,although the process is very hard but it can give you a unexpected results. No matter what you do, You will benefit a lot if you devote yourself to doing it.As far as i am concerned，the results are important, but the process best.

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Hello,everyone,I am very pleased to introduce my work to you.I made it by the famous software--Photoshop,and I call it <maze in mind>.I think the name of it has appeared in your mind as soon as you see it on the screen.
"What an Innovative ideas"_改为idea单数。
“A work is good or not , it depending”——Weather a work good or not largely depends on...
"although the process is very hard but"——but删掉
“you a unexpected”——a 改为an
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