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下面是我自己写的一篇大作文,希望高手们多给意见,我正在备考雅思考试,需要拿高一点分,希望得到更多的指点。大家有空就绑满看下,给点意见,谢谢大家~下面是题目:Manypeo... 下面是我自己写的一篇大作文,希望高手们多给意见,我正在备考雅思考试,需要拿高一点分,希望得到更多的指点。大家有空就绑满看下,给点意见,谢谢大家~
下面是题目:
Many people think that the use of aircraft is not practical and causes many problems thus should be reduced.Agree or disagreed?
下面是我写的作文:
Improvement in modern technology,which acts as a catalyst for change in people's life style,drives the development of transportation.planes,is considered to be a priority means as a high-tech product.Perhaps no issue has led to such endless debate as to whether or not aircrafts should be reduced due to the dire consequences they bring about and their defects.Personally,I have the same doubt.
It is an undoubted fact that airplanes consume precious and limited energy with any worthwhile return.The extensive use of planes increase the weight of the nation as fuels are withering into extinction.A study,which proved by experts,shows that 0.2 kilograms fuels are used when the aircrafts fly up high in the sky,carring 1 kilogram things,such as the drinks,the magazines and so on.One effect of such a boost of planes is that energy dry up in high speed.
Overuse of aircrafts leads to environmental problems.For one thing,the noise of the airports have a bad influence on the surrounding residents,especially the youth and the old.Suffering great annoyance from the airports,people seldom have enough rest.Moreover,not only do the plans emission ruin the eco-envirnonment ,but it also aggravate the global warming.The gases discharged by the planes,such as carbon dioxide and the vapour,are definitely a great threat to the nature,which contaminate the circumstance and stimulate the entire temperature.
Last but not least,there exists a potential danger of land loss result from the excessive airports.In order to feed people's need in flying,the government has thrown large sum of money establishing flying fields irrespective of the limited resources.We are forced to face the Gordian knot caused by the aircrafts.
Granted,millions of merits could be seen via using aeroplane.Nevertheless,in no way should we turn a blind eye to the underlying flaws triggered by aviation devoid of restrictions.In light of aboved-mentioned arguments,it is high time that the government adopt measures to limit the use of aircrafts.
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2010-12-11
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Improvement in modern technology,which acts as a catalyst for THE change in people's LIVING style,drives the development of transportation.PLANES,ARE considered to be a priority means as a high-tech product.Perhaps no issue has led to such AN endless debate as to whether or not aircrafts should be reduced due to the dire consequences they bring about and their defects.Personally,I have the same doubt.
It is an undoubted fact that airplanes consume THE precious and limited energy with any worthwhile return.The extensive use of planes increase the weight of the nation as fuels are withering into extinction.A study,which proved by experts,shows that 0.2 kilograms fuels are used when the aircrafts fly up high in the sky,carring 1 kilogram things,such as the drinks,the magazines and so on.One effect of such a boost of planes is that energy dry up in high speed.
Overuse of aircrafts leads to environmental problems.For one thing,the noise of the airports HAS a bad influence on the surrounding residents,especially the youth and the old.Suffering great annoyance from the airports,people seldom have enough rest.Moreover,not only do the plans emission RUINS the eco-envirnonment ,but it also aggravateS the global warming.The gases discharged by the planes,such as carbon dioxide and the vapour,are definitely a great threat to the nature,which contaminate the circumstance and stimulate the entire temperature.
Last but not least,there exists a potential danger of land loss resultED from the excessive airports.In order to feed people's need in flying,the government has thrown large sum of money establishing flying fields irrespective of the limited resources.We are forced to face the Gordian knot caused by the aircrafts.
Granted,millions of merits could be seen via using aeroplane.Nevertheless,in no way should we turn a blind eye to the underlying flaws triggered by aviation devoid of restrictions.In light of aboved-mentioned arguments,it is high time that the government adopt measures to limit the use of aircrafts
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he modern science and technology progress, which ACTS as a catalyst for change in people's way of life, driving the development of transportation. Planes, is considered to be a preferred means as a high-tech product may not have problems have led to the endless plane whether it should reduce because they serious consequences, and its shortcomings personally, I have the same doubt.
This is the irrefutable facts precious and limited energy consumption aircraft and ideal returns the extensive use of the weight of the plane countries increase to fuel is gradually destroy a research experts proved, and the results show that 0.2 kilograms fuel is used when the plane fly up at high altitude, including 1 kilogram of things, for example: beverages, magazines and other such progress is one effect of the energy plane in high-speed exhausted.
Excessive use of aircraft cause environmental problem, noise airports have a bad influence on the surrounding residents especially young and old from the airport suffered great trouble, people seldom have enough rest and not only emissions ruined this plan eco - envirnonment, but it also exacerbate global warming aircraft emissions gases, such as carbon dioxide and water vapor, the absolute is a serious threat to natural pollution situation and stimulate the whole temperature.
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