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帮忙把年终总结翻译成英文,一些专业词汇的翻译可以保留

马上要年底了，昨天花了半天的时间冥思苦想才把年终总结写好，可这只是完成一半，因为领导是韩国人，要把它翻译成英文才行。
我英语水平很是一般，哪位英文好同学帮我翻译和润色一下，不胜感激，不要让我一年的工作白干了
下面有写的不妥当地方还请各位指点，请写总结比较强的同学指正
谢谢！
正文内容如下：

2010年马上就要过去了，我很高兴在这一年里认识了许多新同事并和大家一起工作，
不权相处的非常快乐而且工作能力有了很大提高。

回顾过去的一年，我主要作了如下工作：
1、数据库日常监控和维护
实时对本地工厂和CIC、OPEN数据库运行情况监控，如db lock、cpu和memory使用情况、wait event等
定期对表空间使用情况、数据库备份状态进行监控。

2、数据库突发事件和紧急情况的处理
对OP报告的数据库异常错误进行及时的处理，如db shutdown,alter log ora-报错，表空间超阀值、归档和备份失败等

3、数据库优化
对各个业务有性能问题的数据库进行优化，通过监控找出运行慢的SQL进行调整。
通过对LNTDERN1_LNTPROD数据库的优化，使其CPU使用率有明显的下降，为波兰项目的上线做了准备。
还有对LGESYMDBSY1M_CHMES、LGENT_NTMES、LNT-XM 等数据库的SQL优化，某些业务模块性能有了明显的提升。

4、数据库和备份与恢复
由于业务的需要，如换新的服务器、部署开发环境，完成了对生产环境数据进行备份恢复，
对部分工厂数据库做备份策略的调整。如LGENT_GSPISND、LGEHN_MES、LGECHMWDDBJ0Q_EZPTEST等

5、完成新数据库创建和补丁升级
因业务需要，创建和部署了一些新数据库，如cnmas、CHNATMT
和team成员一起完成了CIC所有数据库dblink补丁升级，和其它一些安全补丁的升级

6、国内出差项目和人力支援
(1).完成广州LGD数据库部署项目
(2).完成天津FANHAN数据库优化项目
(3).日常对福州MKL数据库监控和维护

7、参与数据库迁移与整合
和team成员一起完成了对LGECHMDBBJ1Q服务器数据库整合和迁移工作

8、对KEB RAC数据库环境的监控和维护

9、新技术和技能提升的学习
通过自己学习,对AIX,UNIX,SOLARIS,LINUX系统有更深入的了解，对oracle 10g\11g加强了学习

下一年的工作计划和展望：
1、认真做好数据库日常监控和维护工作。
2、对数据库突发事件处理做到更加及时、准确。
3、认真做好各个业务部门的数据库支持工作。
4、对数据库高可用性和新技术有更深入的学习，以适应公司的发展。

个人评价和总结：
总的来说今年的工作完成的比较顺利，作为DBA team的一员，能认真负责的完成各位领导和team长交给的任务，
能及时准确的处理各种数据库异常问题，维护系统的稳定进行，把错误损失降到了最低点。能认真遵守公司的规章制度，做到了主人翁意识。
在一年的工作中，我感觉我能力的技术水平有了明显提升，所以，我希望在新的一年工资能有适应的提升，更能体现出我的价值。
最后祝愿公司和我们部门及team的每个人在新的一年都有好的发展。
谢谢！

Answer 1

2010 could soon be over, I am very happy in this year met many new colleague and working with people,
Don't get along very happy right and work ability has been improved a lot.

Reviewing the past year, I mainly made the following job:
1, database daily monitoring and maintenance
Real-time to local factories and CIC, OPEN database operation monitoring, such as db lock, CPU and with usage, pro to etc
Regular use of tablespaces, database backup state monitor.

2, database emergencies and emergency treatment
Report to the database abnormal error op.9 timely processing, such as db shutdown, alter log ora - error, and watch space super threshold, filing and backup failures

3, database optimized
For each business performance problems database optimized, through monitoring find running slowly SQL adjustment.
Based on the optimization LNTDERN1_LNTPROD database, make its CPU usage a marked decline, as Poland project on-line to make the preparation.
And the LGESYMDBSY1M_CHMES, LGENT_NTMES, LNT - such as database SQL optimization XM, some business module performance was obviously ascension.

4, database and backup and restore
Due to business needs, such as changing the new server, deploy development environment, completion of the production environment data backup recovery,
For part of factory database backup strategies do adjustment. If LGENT_GSPISND, LGEHN_MES, LGECHMWDDBJ0Q_EZPTEST etc

5, finish new database creation and patch upgrade
Due to business needs, establish and deployed some new database, such as cnmas, CHNATMT
And members of the team finished CIC all database dblink patch upgrades, and some other security patch of upgrades

6 and domestic business projects and manpower support
(1). LGD database deployment project completion of guangzhou
(2). FANHAN database optimization of the project finished in tianjin
(3). MKL daily on fuzhou database monitoring and maintenance

7, participate in the database migration and integration
And members of the team finished to LGECHMDBBJ1Q server database integration and migration

8 for KEB RAC environment, database of monitoring and maintenance

9, new technology and skills upgrading of learning
Through their study, to AIX, UNIX, LINUX system, SOLARIS have more in-depth knowledge and understanding of the oracle 10g \ 11g strengthened the study

Next year's working plan and expectation:
1, earnestly databases daily monitoring and maintenance work.
2, database to dealing with emergency do more timely and accurate.
3, earnestly each business unit database support work.
4, on the database of high availability and new technologies have further study, in order to adapt to the development of the company.

Personal assessment and summary:
Overall this year's work done smoothly, as a member of the team DBA serious and responsible, can complete team leaders and long the task,
Timely and accurate processing various database abnormal problems, protect the system stability for the mistakes, loss to its lowest point. Can strictly follow the rules of the company, it makes the master consciousness.
In the year, I feel my ability of technical standards have increased, so I hope that in the New Year with adjustment of wages can ascend, to reflect more my worth.
Finally I wish companies and our department and the team of everyone in New Year have good development.
Thank you!

Answer 2

Immediately to the end of the year, yesterday spend half a day time brooding until the year-end summary write good, but it is only halfway complete, because the leadership is Korean, to translate it into English to just go.

My English level is very general, which English good students help me translate and polishing once, appreciate, don't let me one year work in vain

Below are written inappropriate place still deserialized, please write summary compare strong students correct

Thank you!

Text content as follows:

2010 could soon be over, I am very happy in this year met many new colleague and working with people,

Don't get along very happy right and work ability has been improved a lot.

Reviewing the past year, I mainly made the following job:

1, database daily monitoring and maintenance

Real-time to local factories and CIC, OPEN database operation monitoring, such as db lock, CPU and with usage, pro to etc

Regular use of tablespaces, database backup state monitor.

2, database emergencies and emergency treatment

Report to the database abnormal error op.9 timely processing, such as db shutdown, alter log ora - error, and watch space super threshold, filing and backup failures

3, database optimized

For each business performance problems database optimized, through monitoring find running slowly SQL adjustment.

Based on the optimization LNTDERN1_LNTPROD database, make its CPU usage a marked decline, as Poland project on-line to make the preparation.

And the LGESYMDBSY1M_CHMES, LGENT_NTMES, LNT - such as database SQL optimization XM, some business module performance was obviously ascension.

4, database and backup and restore

Due to business needs, such as changing the new server, deploy development environment, completion of the production environment data backup recovery,

For part of factory database backup strategies do adjustment. If LGENT_GSPISND, LGEHN_MES, LGECHMWDDBJ0Q_EZPTEST etc

5, finish new database creation and patch upgrade

Due to business needs, establish and deployed some new database, such as cnmas, CHNATMT

And members of the team finished CIC all database dblink patch upgrades, and some other security patch of upgrades

6 and domestic business projects and manpower support

(1). LGD database deployment project completion of guangzhou

(2). FANHAN database optimization of the project finished in tianjin

(3). MKL daily on fuzhou database monitoring and maintenance

7, participate in the database migration and integration

And members of the team finished to LGECHMDBBJ1Q server database integration and migration

8 for KEB RAC environment, database of monitoring and maintenance

9, new technology and skills upgrading of learning

Through their study, to AIX, UNIX, LINUX system, SOLARIS have more in-depth knowledge and understanding of the oracle 10g 11g strengthened the study

Next year's working plan and expectation:

1, earnestly databases daily monitoring and maintenance work.

2, database to dealing with emergency do more timely and accurate.

3, earnestly each business unit database support work.

4, on the database of high availability and new technologies have further study, in order to adapt to the development of the company.

Personal assessment and summary:

Overall this year's work done smoothly, as a member of the team DBA serious and responsible, can complete team leaders and long the task,

Timely and accurate processing various database abnormal problems, protect the system stability for the mistakes, loss to its lowest point. Can strictly follow the rules of the company, it makes the master consciousness.

In the year, I feel my ability of technical standards have increased, so I hope that in the New Year with adjustment of wages can ascend, to reflect more my worth.

Finally I wish companies and our department and the team of everyone in New Year have good development.

Thank you!

给我！！1

Answer 3

没有悬赏分，估计帮你翻译的人会比较少，PS：个人意见

Answer 4

1. database daily monitoring and maintenance
Real-time local factories and CIC, OPEN the database operation monitoring, such as db lock, cpu and memory usage, wait event, etc.
Periodic table space usage, the database backup status monitoring.

2. database emergency and emergency treatment
Database on OP reports an exception for timely processing, such as shutdown, alter db log an error ora-, table space-thresholds, archiving, and backup failed, etc.

3, database optimization
On the business performance of the database for tuning, and monitoring to identify slow-running SQL.
Through the optimization of the database on LNTDERN1_LNTPROD to CPU usage significantly decreased, as Poland has done a project online.
There are also on LGESYMDBSY1M_CHMES, LGENT_NTMES, LNT-XM, SQL tuning, some business module performance has dramatically improved.

4, database, and backup and recovery
Due to business needs, such as for a new server, deploy, development environment, completed a production environment for data backup and recovery,
On the part of the plant database do backup policy adjustments. If LGENT_GSPISND LGECHMWDDBJ0Q_EZPTEST LGEHN_MES, etc,

5. complete new database creation and patch
Due to business needs, create and deploy a new database, such as the cnmas, CHNATMT
And team members completed the CIC dblink patch upgrade all databases, and other security patch upgrade

6, domestic travel project and human support
(1). the complete Guangzhou LGD database deployment projects
(2). the complete project of Tianjin FANHAN database optimization
(3). daily to Fuzhou MKL database monitoring and maintenance

7. participation in the database migration and integration
And team members completed a LGECHMDBBJ1Q Server database consolidation and migration work

8, KEB RAC database environment monitoring and maintenance

9, new technology and skills upgrading of learning
Through their own learning, on AIX, SOLARIS, UNIX, LINUX systems have a better understanding of oracle 10g\11g enhances learning

The next annual work plans and prospects:
1. do a good job database daily monitoring and maintenance work.
2. database emergency treatment to more timely and accurate.
3, conscientious and individual business sector database support.
4. on the database high availability, and new technologies are more in-depth learning to adapt to the company's development.

Individual assessment and concluded:
All in all this work is done smoothly, as a member of the DBA team, be responsible for completing the leaders and team tasks, assigned by the Minister
Timely and accurate processing of various database exception, the maintenance system stability, the error loss to a minimum. Be careful to comply with company rules and regulations, the sense of ownership.
In a year's work, I feel my ability of technology has dramatically improved, so I hope the new year wage increase can be adapted to reflect my values.
Finally, I wish the company and our departments and the team of everyone in the new year is a good development.
Thank you!