Question

　i am proud of being a college student.the collegelife is fresh,new teachers, new classmates a

　i am proud of being a college student.the collegelife is fresh,new teachers, new classmates and new friends. i like the friendship, and their wide knowledge and opening mind. the grand library, school buildings and wide playground attrattde me very much.my college life is better than i expected, i can do anything i like. in the college we can not only learn the professional knowledge,but also develop our comprehensive abilities.if we can make full use of the period,we can learn many useful things.besides,we should have the active attitude to our life,do a contributionto the society.collegelife is the most precious time in our life.most of us want to become an outstanding man. but there are some students still waste their time. they get together for eating, drinking or playing cards. they're busy in searching for a girlfriend or a boyfriend. they completely forget their task as college students.
　　finally, i hope everybody can try their best to become a worthy person to our country, and make great contributions to the society!
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Answer 1

我以成为一个学院学生而自豪， 学院的生活是新鲜的， 有新老师、新同学和新的朋友。我喜欢这份友谊，他们有广博的知识和开放的头脑。 宏伟的图书馆、学校的建筑和宽广的操场也深深吸引着我。（看不到后文，没法翻译了）