Question

英语中译英

如有可能，我想听听王教授对我的作文的意见（ask）
显而易见，这个国家的人每时每刻都可以喝到鲜牛奶（available）
他企图隐瞒事实，结果却为此付出了沉重的代价（attempt）

Answer 1

If possible, I would like to ask Professor Wang give me some advice about my writing.
Obviously, fresh milk is available for people in this country at any time.
He attempted to conceal the fact, but the results for that time is he paid a heavy price.

Answer 2

If possible, I would like to as Pro. Wang for advice on my paper.
It is obvious that fresh milk are always available to the people of this country .
He attemped to conceal the truth, which only led to a severe consequence.