假定你是张峰,一家英文报社邀请你调查一下中学生对网络使用的情况,并依据调查写一篇新闻报道。请根据下

假定你是张峰,一家英文报社邀请你调查一下中学生对网络使用的情况,并依据调查写一篇新闻报道。请根据下表提供的信息,对你的调查作简要介绍,发给报社。主要用途:1、阅读国内外新... 假定你是张峰,一家英文报社邀请你调查一下中学生对网络使用的情况,并依据调查写一篇新闻报道。请根据下表提供的信息,对你的调查作简要介绍,发给报社。主要用途: 1、阅读国内外新闻, 学习英语。2、发e-mail,欣赏音乐,看电影,玩游戏等3、网上购物出现的问题:1、过多的在网上玩游戏,浪费了时间,影响了学业2、浏览不健康信息,对身心有害注意:1、词数:100左右 2、可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯 3、文章开头已给出As we all know, the Internet is playing an important part in our daily life.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 展开
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As we all know, the Internet is playing an important part in our daily liffe. We often read news at home and abroad and learn foreign languages by ourselves on the Internet. Sometimes we send e-mails to our families as well as friends. Besides, we listen to music, enjoy films and play computer games on it. We can even do shopping without leaving our homes.
However, it has its disadvantages. Many students waste too much time playing computer games, which has a bad effect on their students. What’s worse, the bad information on the Internet does great harm to them. I hope every students can make use of the Internet properly for their students.


试题分析:本文是一篇说明文。文章给出了较详细的汉语提示,要求考生根据提示写出一篇完整的短文。成文时应注意:1.文章内容要齐全;主要用途: (1)阅读国内外新闻, 学习英语;(2)发e-mail,欣赏音乐,看电影,玩游戏等;(3)网上购物;出现的问题:(1)过多的在网上玩游戏,浪费了时间,影响了学业;(2)浏览不健康信息,对身心有害。2.人称:第一人称为主;3.时态:一般现在时;4.适当使用一些高级词汇、短语和句型,以提高文章的档次;5.使用一些连词和插入语使文章表达自然、流畅。
【亮点说明】使用了从句:1.定语从句Many students waste too much time playing computer games, which has a bad effect on their students.2.宾语从句I hope every students can make use of the Internet properly for their students.使用了连词和插入语:Besides, However, What’s worse使用了短语:at home and abroad;have a bad effect on;do great harm to;make use of
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