Question

这个英语作文怎么写？

写一篇英语作文名叫Bad Manners In Public，作文要求是 1、列举人们在公共场所的不良现象 2、对其中某一现象陈述你的看法，并简单说明理由。要求英语作文至少要有80词，求高手们帮帮忙，给写一写。

Answer 1

给你推荐一篇2015年闵行区一模的作文
1.【闵行区】
VII.Writing(共20分)
94.Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “learning to be polite”。（以“学会礼貌”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）

提示：某英语报社正在举办“学会礼貌”的征文活动，请你以“学会礼貌”为题写一篇不少与60个词的短文，谈谈你对礼貌的理解。请列举至少三个不礼貌的行为，并谈谈怎样才能成为有礼貌的人。
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
The following phrases are for reference only.（以下短语仅供参考）
laugh at make noise smoke in public give a seat to keep quiet be friendly(helpful)

范文：
Version 1:

Learning to be polite
To be a man of politeness, we must show respect to others. First of all , we shouldn’t laugh at a people in trouble. Instead, we should try to offer help to the person. Besides, , we should not smoke or make any noise in public, but keep quiet and be friendly to everyone. what’s more , we should not push through a crowd, but wait in line. Last but not least, when we take a bus and see an old man, we should give our seats to him. It is kind and helpful to others.

Version 2：
Learning to be polite
As for as I am concerned,politeness is the reflection of the modern civilization to some extent.In ancient times, surely there was no politeness .I can list three examples to illustrate my definition as follows.
1. Remember to express thanks to those who give a hand.
2. Say good morning when you meet your classmates and teachers.
3. First say “excuse me” when you want to ask somebody for help.
Of course,I can give three opposite examples of politeness.
First,speaking loudly in public place.
Second, using others’ belongings without permission.
Third, entering others’ room without knocking at the door.
Only being a polite person can we are welcomed among those around us.

Version 3:

Learning to be polite
When it comes to manners, I worry about the world a lot.
Nowadays, more and more people pay attention to the benefits, ignoring the good manners. Faced with this problem, I find it necessary for us to learn to be polite.
To begin with, being polite makes others comfortable not horrible or embarrassed. What’s more,, learning to be polite helps us to build a really harmony world.
Don’t hesitate. Do it now. Learn to smile. Learn to be polite to others. And the world will become better and better.

Answer 2

Although we consider ourselves as highly abvanced beings living in a civilized society,
bad manners can still be found here and there. For example,some cyclists run the red
trafficlinghs, many passengers litter waste papers and plastic bags in public places,and
sometourists scrabble in tourist attractions,let alone spit on the street.In the cinema,
some audi-ence talk loudly on cell phones in front of others.
Iam strongly against talking loudly in the cinema,for this behaviour shows no respect atall
to others;what is worse,it upsets the audience who are in the mood of having fun

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第二点没说清楚

Answer 3

Bad Manners in Public
As highly avanced beings living in a civilized society,we should get rid of bad manners.However,bad manners can still be found here and there. For example,some cyclists break the traffic rules, many passengers litter waste papers and plastic bags in public places,and some tourists scrabble in tourist attractions,let alone spit on the street.In the cinema,some talk loudly on cell phones in front of others.
As to me, I am strongly against talking loudly in the cinema,for this behaviour shows no respect to others.What's worse,it upsets the audience who are in the mood of having fun.

Answer 4

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