短文改错。 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处

短文改错。假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词... 短文改错。 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏子符号(/),并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。 修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意:1. 每处错误仅限1词; 2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。 When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it.One day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father themoney. But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleased if I showed him the money a month after. He gives me the other fifty. You can imagine how much happy I waswhen I rode to school on my own bicycle. _____________________________________________________________________________ 展开
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     When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it . One day I saw
                                                           1. friends                                                    2. one
a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father∧the money. But he said he could 
                              3. which                                                             4. for
only give me half of the money. He should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the
                                             5. I                                                                                           6. 去掉the
school. My father was pleased if I showed him the money a month after . He gives me the other fifty. You
                                          7. when                                        8. later    9. gave
can imagine how much happy I was when I rode to school on my own bicycle. 
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