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帮我看看语法有没有错误

Today, I started the make milk tea. In my mother's help, I finally ready material. First, I soaked a bag of black tea. The tea's water is cup's half. Then put sugar in the tea inside, because the tea is hot, can be quickly dissolved. Then pour the milk inside the cup. Tea and milk together, ready to complete. Wait a few minutes. Ice from the refrigerator and take out into the milk tea . Finished, in future I like to drink the milk tea.

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Today, i made milk tea. With my mother's help, i finally prepared the material. First, I soaked a bag of black tea with half a cup of water. Then i put sugar in the tea. The tea was hot, so the sugar quickly dissolved. Pouring the milk inside the cup, i blended the tea and the milk. It was near completion. After a few minutes, i took some ice from the refrigerator and placed them in the milk tea. I finished. In the future I would like to drink my selfmade milk tea.

第一行：固定词组：start doing something or start to do something
with someone's help
句子太长，应该断开来。i finally ready material没有动词。
第二行：first, i soaked a bag of black tea. the tea's water is cup's half 有点点累赘。
then put sugar in the tea 没有主语。后面那句话（because....)这样子接太长了。最好不要用because 做句子的开头。
第三行：then pour the milk inside the cup 没主语。tea and milk together....没动词。
第四行：wait a few minutes 不应该用祈使句，你不是在告诉别人做什么而是在陈述你自己在做什么，用陈述句。ice from the....没主语，时态要保持一致，用过去式就通篇用过去时。
第五行：finished 和最后一句话完全没有联系，要断开。
其他还有一些地方我自己认为改掉好一点，楼主介意的话就改回来吧，那些地方都不是语法错误，包括改变句子开头之类的。要记得一句句子里面必须有主语和动词，除非是祈使句，而这是一篇陈述问，所以不应该有祈使句的出现。另外记得保持时态一致。