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请各位英语大神帮帮看一下我的作文有没有语法和拼写错误，不要糊弄，谢谢

I like sports, because doing sports is really a good thing. Firstly, it helps me keep healthy. Exercise is one of the most active and effective means to enhance the physical health. Secondly, doing sports is a good way to relax. When you are upset, sport may pull you out from depression. Finally, it’s easier to make friends while take part in sport activities, because you have the same interest. It’s important for making friends. All in all, I get a lot from sports.
别来捣乱！谢谢

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第二行We要大写，got改为 went ，坐飞机去那儿，不好说坐飞机到达那儿。其它没问题。

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I like sports, because doing sports is really a good thing. Firstly, it helps me keep healthy. Exercise is one of the most active and effective means to enhance the 是这个

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倒数第六行When 起建议把人称和第一段的人称统一一下，改为第一人称。

out 后from 改为 of 。因为 out of 相当于from。

while 后面的take 要改为 taking

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for making 改为 to make

根据你最后一句的人称也是＂I “，再次建议把you改为 I 和 We

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谢谢采纳

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We went to Beijing on vacation on May 1st. we got there by plane.We visited the Great Wall in the morning. There were many people there. I took many photos . The food in Beijingis very delicious . I really like Beijingduck . We ate a lot in a restaurant. I have a good time there.

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