Question

帮忙改一下错，初中英语

This evning I was about to pay for hat l had chosen in the shop when I found I did not have enough
money. When I began to remove some item, another shopper hands me a twenty-yuan note. Having refused by me, the man told me a story. His mother was serious ill in hospital. Every day he visited her
and brought herself several flowers. This morning he went to there as usual but his mother got angry with
him for spend too much money on flowers. She demanded he did something more meaningful with that
money. I finally accepted his offer and thanked the man and his mother for their kind.

Answer 1

改错之后的

追答

刚才那张不是很清楚

Answer 2

The successful man in my heart
Who is the successful man in my heart?sure is my friend Fandy.A14 years old beautiful girl with a long black hear who is good at study.What is more ,She is esay to get along with,It is she that always does me a favor whenever I am in trouble . What a good girl! she is my angel in my life I think .There is no doubt that She is successful.She almost does everything perfectly Fandy.sets a good example for me and I will learn from her ----try to do my best,and to help others,! I will study hard in order to catch up with her!
个人意见，水平有限，仅供参考 ，注意单复数， catch her是抓住她，应用catch up with her