Question

麻烦英语高手帮我斧正一下这篇六级作文！

For the past few years there have been more and more students ignored the study of Chinese.Now let us discuss why they became like this.First of all we can watch more and more English movies and listen to more and more English song though Internet now.These recreations make English become popular.Secondly,our country’s education have made English become very important to the students.If you are not good at English you can’t go to a good college. The last but not the least,there are a lot of companies in our country doing business with foreigners ,they need many people who know English well to help them.
In my opinion,though English is very useful today,we should not ignore Chinese study because it is our mother tongue.It keep us remembering who I am.There will be one day that Chinese become more useful than English and the foreigners have to learn Chinese well to do business with us.

Answer 1

For the past few years there have been more and more students ignored the study of Chinese.Now let us discuss why they became like this.First of all we can watch more and more English movies and listen to more and more English song(s) though Internet (which) make English become popular.Secondly,the education of our country made English become very important to the students.If you are not good at English you can’t go to a good college. The last but not the least, there are a lot of companies in our country deal with foreigner business afairs, they need many people who know English well to work for them.
In my opinion,though, English is very useful today,we should not ignore Chinese study because it is our mother tongue.It keep(s) us remember who I am. In the near future that Chinese become will be more useful than English and the foreigners have to learn Chinese well in order to do business with us.
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Answer 2

In the past few years there have been more and more students ignoring the study of Chinese.Now let us discuss why this happens.First of all ,we can watch more and more English movies and listen to more and more English songs thorugh the Internet now.These recreations make English popular.Secondly,our country’s education have made it important for the students to learn English.If you are not good at English, you can’t go to a good college. The last but not the least,there are a lot of companies in our country doing business with foreigners.They need many people who know English well to help them.
In my opinion,though English is more and more useful today,we should not ignore Chinese study because it is our mother tongue.It keeps us remembering who we are.There will be one day that Chinese will become more useful than English and the foreigners have to learn Chinese well to do business with us.

Answer 3

In the past few years there have been more and more students ignoring the study of Chinese.Now let us discuss why this happens.First of all ,we can watch more and more English movies and listen to more and more English songs thorugh the Internet now.These recreations make English popular.Secondly,our country’s education have made it important for the students to learn English.If you are not good at English, you can’t go to a good college. The last but not the least,there are a lot of companies in our country doing business with foreigners.They need many people who know English well to help them.
In my opinion,though English is more and more useful today,we should not ignore Chinese study because it is our mother tongue.It keeps us remembering who we are.There will be one day that Chinese will become more useful than English and the foreigners have to learn Chinese well to do business with us.
For the past few years there have been more and more students ignored the study of Chinese.Now let us discuss why they became like this.First of all we can watch more and more English movies and listen to more and more English song though Internet now.These recreations make English become popular.Secondly,our country’s education have made English become very important to the students.If you are not good at English you can’t go to a good college. The last but not the least,there are a lot of companies in our country doing business with foreigners ,they need many people who know English well to help them.
In my opinion,though English is very useful today,we should not ignore Chinese study because it is our mother tongue.It keep us remembering who I am.There will be one day that Chinese become more useful than English and the foreigners have to learn Chinese well to do business with us.
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