Question

请求英语高手帮我修改一下本人写的两篇四级作文，谢谢，谢谢，谢谢

1：
In China,the Spring Fasitival is not only a primary holiday but also a sense of unforgetable in reunion.
A great number of Chinese are customed with seeing the Spring Fasitival with whole family at New Year’s Eve.For one thing,it seems like a essential part at this special night,people could relax completely by a variety of progammes to get rid of the burden of work.For another thing,people could get together to summerize the pass year and fill up the ivgor to meet the challenges in the future.
However,other people point out the Spring Fasitival shall be cancel.They think presious time shall spend on holiday a meeting to share the happiness and sorrow face to face or laund an outdoor activities instead of wasting on TV.
In my view of this phenomenon,I think it is based on your choice.It just a way which establish a harmonious atmosphere for each menbers to enjoy the great festival and increase the loving between all of us.
2：
An increasing numbers of museums have been accessed free aimed at making more and more people get useful imformation about various kinds of fields.
Even though the decision is convenient for citizens to widen their outlook,the number of vistors who have a desire for having a look is on the rise bings some problems.First,the safety is the vitally important faced with us and everyone should pay more attention to the safety on life or property.Second,all the exhibitions are so precious that people should not touch with fingers instead of keep a distances to look.Third,if the government do not make up the financial problem for a long time,the museums may have the difficult in lving better.
To sum up,in my opinions,though free museums are a sign of civilization progress admission must be conducted in a controlled manner.

Answer 1

1.
第一句：Fasitival应为Festival，梁郑模unforgetable应为unforgettable，去掉in
第二句：are customed with seeing改为have the custom to see（custom是名词），Fasitival应为Festival
第三句：第一个a应为an，progammes应为programmes
第四句：summerize应为summarize，pass应为橡缓past，ivgor应为vigor
第五句：out后加that，丛仔Fasitival应为Festival，shall改为should，cancel改为canceled
第六句：presious应为precious，shall改为should be，spend改为spent，把on holiday放在precious time之后，a meeting前加on，去掉第一个face，laund改为launch，activities改为activity
第八句：It后加is，which改为to，menbers改为member，loving改为love，between应为among

2.
第一句：numbers改为number，imformation应为information
第二句：vistors应为visitors，brings改为to bring
第四句：instead of改为but，distances改为distance
第五句：Third改为Thirdly，do改为does，difficult改为difficulty，lving改为living
第六句：opinions改为opinion，progress后最好加逗号

另外，记得英语句号和逗号后都要空格的哦~