Question

帮我纠正下语法错误，谢谢哈，太感谢了

What did I learn about my oral English skill? I will say that I did learn a lot with the help of these activities. First, it is very interesting to attend the English Garden from which I can learn some foreign customs. I can understand well when I speak with the foreigners. Second, going to the website to have a voice chat with the foreigners also can enhance my oral English. They will help me with my pronunciation, intonation, and rhythm. I can correct the mistakes and remember them firmly

Answer 1

What did I learn about my oral English skill? I will say that（that 去掉 ） I have（加have） learned a lot（用many比较好 a lot 是一种口头用语） with the help of these activities.
（前面这句 没搞懂你在说什么） First of all(first of all比较好听点), it is very interesting， because （连起来 整句话会怪怪的） attend the English Garden from which I can learn some foreign customs. I can understand well when I speak with the foreigners.（这句话改成 i can understand what foreigners talking about. ） Second, going to the website to have a voice chat with the foreigners also can enhance my oral English.(改成 second, i went to a website to practice my english with a tutor/ a foreigners) They will help me with my pronunciation, intonation, and rhythm. I can correct the mistakes(grammar) and remember（remember 换成 memorize） them firmly

Answer 2

可以提供一下你的汉语意义吗？这样会比较准确