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帮我纠正下语法错误，谢谢了，太感谢了哈

Seventh, singing English songs not only I can relax myself but also I can learn many new words. Eighth, I am used to listening to the news every night, which I can learn some news from it and I always talk them with my friends the next mornings. Ninth, sometimes we have role playing with my friends in English. We play in turn and ask others advices on pronunciation, intonation and action in order to do well the next time. Tenth, we will have hot-spot debate at the weekend. We talk about the recent issue or problem together in English. It can help me speak English fluently. And I can know of the important event happened recently.

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Seventh, singing English songs not only I can relax myself but also I can learn many new words.
两个I can显得很累赘。试着用I作主语。What I may benefit from singing English songs is not only stress relief and relaxation, but also an understanding and recognition of new words from the lyrics.

Eighth, I am used to listening to the news every night, which I can learn some news from it and I always talk them with my friends the next mornings.
从句用错了。用了which就不该出现后面的it。可以说，from which I will gain various topics to discuss with (talk about) my friends the next morning.

Ninth, sometimes we have role playing with my friends in English. We play in turn and ask others advices on pronunciation, intonation and action in order to do well the next time.

we enjoy my time by having role-playing games in English with my friends. We take turns to ask each other for advices on .....to improve our language skills.

Tenth, we will have hot-spot debate at the weekend. We talk about the recent issue or problem together in English. It can help me speak English fluently. And I can know of the important event happened recently.

We hold a "hot-spot" debate at the weekends, in which we'll talk about the recent issues or events together in English. This surely can improve my English fluency. What's more, I get to know most of the important events happening everyday.