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题目：DoYouLikeKnock-offProducts1．近年来，山寨产品大量出现2．人们对此观点不一3．我的想法Inrecentyears,alargernumbe...
题目： Do You Like Knock-off Products
1． 近年来，山寨产品大量出现
2． 人们对此观点不一
3． 我的想法
In recent years,a larger number of knock-off products have been made in native.It is common that so many knock-off products around us,and it is naturally the products has been the order of the day.
Some people in favor of the idea of using knock-off products because the price of knock-off products cheaper than products of normal brand.However,other peoples stand on different ground.They firmly point out that the qualities of the product is so crude,as a result,it was always needing to be repaired.
As far as I concerned , I consent the latter idea.First and foremost,knock-off products might aren’t safe for us.For example , the knock-off cellphone was reported causing a explode when someone use it. Besides,most of knock-off products has invade normal companies’ benefit seriously. In summary, the nagetive asprects of using knock-off product overweigh the advantages. As a college student, I am supposed to reject using knock-off products.
题目： How To Cut College Spending
1. 有些大学生缺乏理财能力，花钱大手大脚，消费超支严重
2. 针对这一现象，给出建议
3. 呼吁大学生养成良好的理财习惯
Cullently,It is caused a heated debat on how to cut college spending in campus. Some college students lack of the ability of utilizing their finances. For example,they are always spenging a mount of money on uesless thing, as a result , their money beyond their owned which from their parents.
It is common that the penomenon of waste money in campus has been a serious problem.Nowadays,how can we slove it? First and foremost , we should spend money on something which we really need . Besides, we should devise ourself plan about how to mange our finances, and in order to we have enough money to support daily living.In addition, we can get a partime-job which is preparation for college students. In this way, we not only can earn extra allowance,but also can get a meaning living during university.
Let’s make a good effort to have a proper habit of college spending. 展开
1． 近年来，山寨产品大量出现
2． 人们对此观点不一
3． 我的想法
In recent years,a larger number of knock-off products have been made in native.It is common that so many knock-off products around us,and it is naturally the products has been the order of the day.
Some people in favor of the idea of using knock-off products because the price of knock-off products cheaper than products of normal brand.However,other peoples stand on different ground.They firmly point out that the qualities of the product is so crude,as a result,it was always needing to be repaired.
As far as I concerned , I consent the latter idea.First and foremost,knock-off products might aren’t safe for us.For example , the knock-off cellphone was reported causing a explode when someone use it. Besides,most of knock-off products has invade normal companies’ benefit seriously. In summary, the nagetive asprects of using knock-off product overweigh the advantages. As a college student, I am supposed to reject using knock-off products.
题目： How To Cut College Spending
1. 有些大学生缺乏理财能力，花钱大手大脚，消费超支严重
2. 针对这一现象，给出建议
3. 呼吁大学生养成良好的理财习惯
Cullently,It is caused a heated debat on how to cut college spending in campus. Some college students lack of the ability of utilizing their finances. For example,they are always spenging a mount of money on uesless thing, as a result , their money beyond their owned which from their parents.
It is common that the penomenon of waste money in campus has been a serious problem.Nowadays,how can we slove it? First and foremost , we should spend money on something which we really need . Besides, we should devise ourself plan about how to mange our finances, and in order to we have enough money to support daily living.In addition, we can get a partime-job which is preparation for college students. In this way, we not only can earn extra allowance,but also can get a meaning living during university.
Let’s make a good effort to have a proper habit of college spending. 展开
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