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真正的文章是自己写的，你把自己想的汉语用英语表现出来就好了，要想英语的进步还是要靠自己多写·多查·多读。这一篇《雪》。希望你自己改动，删减(x写的太长)，雪可以改成记叙文，说不定你能由此写出更好的文章。The Shoes
My mother usually are busy, no one inside was not too busy the past few days, but back home she will be busy to do this and that, no free time, but also in their lives and show concern for my learning .
On one occasion, the weather has turned warm, the original repulsive thermal wear shoes that are tired of single shoes not to wear a small. Mom raised me to buy a pair of larger shoes. Mom always agreed to my request, that is, there is no time for me to buy shoes. Nothing I can do.
On this day, my mother came back from work earlier than usual to see I have to go home after school, said: "Xiaoli, eat dinner, I will take you to buy shoes!" "Good, good mother!" Said, two of us hurried dinner.
Eat dinner, my mother settled down to go on to take me off
We are two people to the streets, while away while watching. At this time, I saw a roadside shops, is a store specifically to buy shoes. On the night,I told my mother. Mother took me to go inside. I see there are a pair of shoes I disdain. I shook his head, went out. Mom took me to continue to move forward. Came to the second shoe shop. Her mother a pair of eyes, I feel satisfied with sitting on the edge of the bench to try to wear again. Alas, this is too small pairs of shoes, clothing feet get hurt. Asked the shop owner asked, he said that this type of the double greatest. I had also followed her mother went out. Mother encouraged me, said: "Son, it does not matter, there are a lot of shops can buy." Mom also took me to several other shops turn a switch. Is not a style not to one's liking, that is, the size is inappropriate, Alas, a pair of shoes is so difficult. I too feel that there are some tired, then see the mother or confidence, so I had to follow her mother to continue to move forward.
Walk more than a dozen stores, I still did not get my favorite shoes. I saw almost the whole street to go over, shops will also be emptied. How do? Mother said: "go, and then take a look at the past!"The god really pays off, I am in the final of a store and I buy a pair of shoes like her mother. At this time, we have visited in the streets more than two hours, and has come to a little over 9:00, and many stores have closed the shop.
From time to buy shoes, I realized that the mother really hurts me!
真正的文章是自己写的，你把自己想的汉语用英语表现出来就好了，要想英语的进步还是要靠自己多写·多查·多读。这一篇《雪》。希望你自己改动，删减(x写的太长)，雪可以改成记叙文，说不定你能由此写出更好的文章。The Shoes
My mother usually are busy, no one inside was not too busy the past few days, but back home she will be busy to do this and that, no free time, but also in their lives and show concern for my learning .
On one occasion, the weather has turned warm, the original repulsive thermal wear shoes that are tired of single shoes not to wear a small. Mom raised me to buy a pair of larger shoes. Mom always agreed to my request, that is, there is no time for me to buy shoes. Nothing I can do.
On this day, my mother came back from work earlier than usual to see I have to go home after school, said: "Xiaoli, eat dinner, I will take you to buy shoes!" "Good, good mother!" Said, two of us hurried dinner.
Eat dinner, my mother settled down to go on to take me off
We are two people to the streets, while away while watching. At this time, I saw a roadside shops, is a store specifically to buy shoes. On the night,I told my mother. Mother took me to go inside. I see there are a pair of shoes I disdain. I shook his head, went out. Mom took me to continue to move forward. Came to the second shoe shop. Her mother a pair of eyes, I feel satisfied with sitting on the edge of the bench to try to wear again. Alas, this is too small pairs of shoes, clothing feet get hurt. Asked the shop owner asked, he said that this type of the double greatest. I had also followed her mother went out. Mother encouraged me, said: "Son, it does not matter, there are a lot of shops can buy." Mom also took me to several other shops turn a switch. Is not a style not to one's liking, that is, the size is inappropriate, Alas, a pair of shoes is so difficult. I too feel that there are some tired, then see the mother or confidence, so I had to follow her mother to continue to move forward.
Walk more than a dozen stores, I still did not get my favorite shoes. I saw almost the whole street to go over, shops will also be emptied. How do? Mother said: "go, and then take a look at the past!"The god really pays off, I am in the final of a store and I buy a pair of shoes like her mother. At this time, we have visited in the streets more than two hours, and has come to a little over 9:00, and many stores have closed the shop.
From time to buy shoes, I realized that the mother really hurts me!
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My favorite sports is playing basketball/ football/volleyball because it’s good for my health
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i am a pig.i am a dog.i am a cat.i am a jj.i am a pp.i am a dd.i am a jb.i am a sb.i am a didi.i am a gg.i am a jiji.you too.^-^
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