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求英语帝帮忙改正短文错误再英译中 可以再加分

不知道这篇文章有没有错误 请帮我改成一篇连贯正确的短文 然后再翻译成中文 谢谢
Friendship is one of the GREatest pleasures that people can enjoy． It is very difficult to find a better definition of friendship． A true friend does indeed find pleasure in our joy and share sorrow in our grief． In time of trial， he or she is always at our side to give us his or her help and comfort．。
friendship begins with meeting someone along the path of life.
someone you get to know, and gradually get to know even better.
you discover what a joy it is to spend your moments with this person.
it's nice the way the good feelings remain.
the happiness lasts, and the memories you make start to turn into some of your favorite treasures.
friendship is two paths converging on the way to the same beautiful view

A life without a friend is a life without a sun. Friendship is one of the most important things in everyone's life.
Friends are who changes your life just by being a part of it, who makes you believe that there really is good in the world, who convinces you that there really is an unlock door just waiting for you to open it.
When you’re down, friends lift you up. When you lose your way, friends guide you and cheer you on.
So cherish your friend,

Friendship is both a source of pleasure and a part of good health.When something wonderful happens to us, sharing the happiness of the occasion with friends intensifies2 our joy. In times of trouble and tension, when our spirits are low, telling our worries and fears to friends eases the stress. Moreover, we may even get some practical suggestions for solving a particular problem.friendship is two hearts that share and that are able to say things no outsiders ever could.
friendship is an inner door that only a friend has the key to.
friendship is a gift, counually giving happiness.
it is strong and supportive, and few things in all the world will ever compare with the joy that comes from its wonderful bond.
i want to know that our friendship is one thing i'll cherish all my life,and it's something that you can always count on.

Answer 1

友情是一个人可以享有的最好的快乐。要给友谊找一个很好的定义非常难。一个真正的朋友可以和我们同甘共苦。在时间的检验下，他或她总是站在我们这边，给予我们帮助和安慰。
友谊会伴随一个人的一生，你们开始认识，并且逐渐了解。你发现和这个人在一起的时光是很快乐的。这种感觉很好。幸福的存在，那些你所拥有的记忆会变成你最喜欢的财富。友谊是两条汇于一点的美丽的风景。
没有朋友的生活如同生活中没有了太阳。友谊是每个人生活中最重要的东西
朋友是那些成为了你生活的一部分并改变了你生活的人，那些使你认为世界真的很美好的人，那些使你相信真的有一道不幸的门在你面前，也会有人等你来打开它。
当你低落的时候，朋友们会鼓舞你。当你迷茫时，朋友们会指引你并为你喝彩。
所以珍惜你的朋友。
友谊是快乐的来源也是身体健康的一部分。当我们身边发生什么好事时，和朋友分享那些幸福的情景可以增加我们的快乐。再有麻烦或者紧张的时候，我们情绪低落，把我们的顾虑和工具告诉朋友们可以减少我们的压力。甚至我们还可以得到一些实用的方法来解决一个特殊的问题。友谊是两颗心在一起风向可以说任何的事情，没有阻隔。友谊是内心的一道门只有朋友才有打开门的钥匙。
友谊是一个礼物，可以带来幸福。
他是强烈的支持的，在这个世界上的很少的东西能和这种美好的连结相比较。
我想知道我们的友谊是我一声都要珍爱的一样东西，也是你可以依赖的东西。

错误或者表达不清的地方：
1.it's nice the way the good feelings remain.我不知道你这句话想表达什么具体的意思，但是the way和 the good feelings都是名词，而且一个句子中出现了两个动词，be动词和remain。所以梳理一下你这句话要表达的意思。
2.intensifies2 our joy，这里可能是输入的问题吧，要改动一下，另外增加也可以用increase。
3.when our s are low，spirit一般都表示精神，所以要说情绪的话，建议用emotion
4.you can always count on.依赖，一般都用rely on或者depend on

Answer 2

友谊是最大的乐趣之一,人们可以享受。很难找到一个更好的定义的友谊。一个真正的朋友确实喜悦我们的喜乐和分享悲伤,在我们伤心。在试炼的时候,他或她总是出现在我们的身边给我们他或她的帮助和安慰。
友谊始于遇见一个沿着小路的生活。
有人你了解,逐步了解得更好。
你会发现,真是高兴度过你的时刻这个人。
这是