Question

请帮忙看看语法有什么错误吗？

Answer 1

时态有问题，除第三句是客观事实外，全文时态应保持过去式一致，第四句can应改为could，第五句is应改为was，have应改为had，最后一句is改为was
另外，第五句的两个简单句没有关联词，是错误的。要么在逗号后面加上and等合乎逻辑的关联词，要么逗号改成句号拆成两个句子，简单句是不能直接拼成长句的
再另外，seaside前的介词应该是at而不是in，barbecue前要加a

Answer 2

从So we can... 到We have a... 这一段的时态错了，描述的是去年暑假的事情，都应该用过去时。

Answer 3

您好 

"Fishing is also an indispensable activity in the seaside"中的is应改为was

"we have a good time"中的have应改为had

一定要注意全文语法统一噢，其他就没有任何问题了

修改全文如下：

My last summer vacation was full and interesting. Last summer vacation, my family and I went to Sanya. Sanya is a coastal city. So we can go swimming and play on the beach. Fishing was also an indispensable activity in the seaside, we had a good time. Finally, we had barbecue on the beach. Sanya is really a beautiful and interesting city.

望采纳 谢谢