Question

各位求指点，。。英语作文。。

My Dream
Do you have dream?Do you want to be a doctor,teacher or a singer and so on.Oh,I think different people have different dream.
I want to be a reporter,I think this is an interesting job,and I think I wil find happy here.
First,I must finish university ,then,I will go to a TV station to find a job.It's reporter.If I succeed,I will very happy!If so ,I can get to anywhere,I can also see lots of beautiful place .And I wish people can accept my all kinds of questions,because that's my job!
This is my dream,can you tell me what's your dream?
有什么不对的就评出来哈、。。。。

Answer 1

题目：dream

Everyone has their own dreams, I am the same. But my dream is not a lawyer, not a doctor, not actors, not even an industry.Perhaps my dream big people will find it ridiculous, but this has been my pursuit!每个人都有自己的梦想，我也一样。但是我的梦想不是律师，不是医生，不是演员，甚至不是一种行业！我的梦想也许大人们会觉得可笑，但是，这是我一直追寻的！My dream is to want to have a folk life! I want it to become a beautiful painting, it is not only sharp colors, but also the colors are bleak, I do not rule out the painting is part of the black, but I will treasure these bleak colors! Not yet, how about, a colorful painting, if not bleak, add color, how can it more prominent beautiful(Joozone Note:美丽人生)?我的梦想是想要自己有一个七彩的人生！我要它成为一幅美丽的画，它不但要有鲜明的颜色，也要有暗淡的颜色，我不排除这幅画有一部分的黑色，我反而会很珍惜这些暗淡的颜色！不是吗，试问一下，一幅色彩鲜艳的画，如果不加一点暗淡的颜色，又怎能更突出它的美呢？Life is like painting, painting the bright red color represents life beautiful happy moments. Painting a bleak color represents life difficult, unpleasant time. You may find a flat with a beautiful road is not very good yet, but I do not think it will. If a person lives flat then what is the point? Life is only a short few decades, I want it to go Finally, Each memory is a solid.人生就象画一样，画中鲜艳的颜色就代表着人生美丽快乐的时光。画中暗淡的颜色就代表着人生遭遇困难，不愉快的时候。也许你会觉得拥有一条平坦美丽的路不是很好吗，但我并不觉得。一个人如果一生平坦那有什么意思呢？人生只有短短几十年，我要他走到最后时，每一个回忆都是充实的！ 注：中文是翻译

Answer 2

1. Do you have(a)dream?//dream为可数名词，应加a.

2. Do you want to be a doctor,(a)teacher or a singer and so on?

3. I think different people have different dream(dreams).

4. and I think I wil find happy (happiness)here.

5. It's (a) reporter.

6. I will  (be) very happy!

7. I can get to anywhere.//不能加to,anywhere 为副词.

8. I can also see lots of beautiful place(places).

9. can you tell me what's your dream?
   //can you tell me what  your dream is?

Answer 3

开头改下Everyone has his dream.
结尾This is my dream.It is really great.I think my dream will come true one day.

像can you tell me what's your dream? 这个就不用问了显庸俗

Answer 4

a dream。dreams。单数复数的问题