高中英语，短文改错，速度出答案，请写清楚，谢谢，急！！！
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亲，很高兴为你解答，这是上海的一年的中考真题作文哦。
Dear David,
Last week ,we held(前面有last week，只要用一般过去时就可以了） a dissussion on what (what作 do的宾语，我们应该做什么，而不是怎么做）we should do for our school before we graduate.
The students in our school have different suggestions（different后面用可数名词复数形式）.Some students think that we collect money to buy some books and give them to the school library or do(这里要加一个do，无法和前面共用谓语动词） something else for the school. Other students think that it's not necessary to cost money. We can study hard（hard努力的/地，hardly几乎不，难得） and make our school feel(make sb. do sth.) proud of us.
In my opinion (in one's opinion),we can collect our pocket money to buy some books for(buy sth. for sb. ) our library. we can buy some detective stories and English novels. They don't cost much but they are(这里少了一个BE动词） very useful. Younger（不用加定冠词） students will like them（这里要用复数）. I hope every student in our school can do it.
I'd like to know your idea. Could you give me some advice?
Best wishes ! Li Ming.
改动的后面有解释哈~~
Dear David,
Last week ,we held(前面有last week，只要用一般过去时就可以了） a dissussion on what (what作 do的宾语，我们应该做什么，而不是怎么做）we should do for our school before we graduate.
The students in our school have different suggestions（different后面用可数名词复数形式）.Some students think that we collect money to buy some books and give them to the school library or do(这里要加一个do，无法和前面共用谓语动词） something else for the school. Other students think that it's not necessary to cost money. We can study hard（hard努力的/地，hardly几乎不，难得） and make our school feel(make sb. do sth.) proud of us.
In my opinion (in one's opinion),we can collect our pocket money to buy some books for(buy sth. for sb. ) our library. we can buy some detective stories and English novels. They don't cost much but they are(这里少了一个BE动词） very useful. Younger（不用加定冠词） students will like them（这里要用复数）. I hope every student in our school can do it.
I'd like to know your idea. Could you give me some advice?
Best wishes ! Li Ming.
改动的后面有解释哈~~
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