Question

请帮我看看我的这篇英语作文有基本的语法错误吗？并指出不足之处！谢谢

Why not go to West Hill for a picnic this Sunday ? Sure!
Xiaoxiao and me are going to West Hill for a picnic this Sunday .
Xiaoxiao will take something to eat ,such as hamburgers. I like to take something to drink ,such as apple juice .
How nice the picnic was!
请指教！
请问最后一句结尾写什么？表示的意思是 “我想那是一个愉快的野餐！”

Answer 1

1
时态
一篇文章一种时态。。
前面将来时，后面就应该也是将来时
而不能用过去时态was
改为will be
2
短语搭配
携带某物是
take with 不能take直接加某物
Xiaoxiao will take with something to eat
I like to take with something to drink ,such as apple juice
3
习惯用法
such as表列举一般后面都是2个以上，多举一点例子更好啦
对于
like to do 和like doing
并无明显区别大多可以通用
不用改的
如果非要区别既有点苛刻啦

to do强调一次性喜欢
doing 强调一直喜欢
这里一次性或许更好些
故笔者的to do 无误
复杂点的表达That will be a picnic which is full of joy ,I think.
简单的，That will be a very joyful picnic，I think

Answer 2

这一句" I like to take something to drink "改成“I like taking something to drink.”

Answer 3

I think that a very joyful picnic!