Question

帮忙看一下这篇初一英语作文有没有语法错误

I want to be
Everyone has his dream, some want to be a teacher , some want to be a doctor. As for me ,I want to be a writer.
I often do some reading. I think the articles of the writers are so wonderful. So I try writing in my free time. Then I find me writing can let me happy. I can write my imagination, my idea or my story in my articles.
In a word ,I want to be a writer in the future.
我觉得中间的时态可能有点问题，以及then I find…… 那里可能也有句式不对的地方。求大神帮忙！急急急！

Answer 1

than i find that那里你可以换成Besides, i found that.......然后你要注意write sth in 和 write sth on的区别 .你这里应该是write my imagination...........on.......

追答

还有就是make me happy 比let me happy好.虽然中文翻译是一样.