Question

帮忙吧这段话翻译成英文。

您好！
我是山东财政学院金融学院2011届本科生。我校是由国家财政部和山东省人民政府共同创办的普通高等财经院校，将于2011年3月正式升格为山东财经大学。
我于近日从贵行网站获悉贵行已开始校园2011届校园招聘，大学期间我一直关注金融行业市场的发展，也特别希望能够加入贵行。经过22年的发展，中国邮政储蓄银行已在广大公众中树立了社会知名、百姓信赖的业务品牌，所提供的基础金融服务已经深入人心，成为重要的零售金融机构。我认为适合贵单位的工作必须恪守诚信，正直忠诚；工作富有责任感，踏实肯干，具有良好的快速学习能力和分析能力、团队合作能力和沟通交流能力；做事认真、谨慎、细心、稳重，能为集团创造更多的价值。我自信我符合以上素质要求。
大学四年，在学校的精心培养和我的个人努力下，我系统地掌握了金融行业的专业知识，英语应用能力优秀，能熟练操作计算机。此外，在校期间我积极参加校园活动和社会实践，组织参与志愿者活动，校内羽毛球、乒乓球等文体活动比赛，并从事多次销售，客服，助理等兼职工作较多地进行对外沟通联系，培养团队意识和社会责任感。
我希望凭借自身所具有的工作实践经历和知识技能，以及自身的刻苦、进取精神，为贵公司的未来发展贡献力量。

千万不要有语病啊。

Answer 1

Hello!
Shandong University of Finance I 2011 session of the Undergraduate Finance Institute. Our school is by the Ministry of Finance and the People's Government of Shandong Province, the general co-founder of Business Schools, will be held in March 2011 was upgraded to Shandong University of Finance.
I was recently informed from your line of site 2011, the Bank has started school campus recruitment session, the University I have been concerned about the financial industry during the development of the market, but also particularly like to join the Bank. After 22 years of development, China Postal Savings Bank has been established in the general public in the social well-known, business people trust the brand, providing basic financial services has gained recognition as a major retail financial institutions. I think that work for your organization must adhere to honesty, integrity; working and responsible, practical work hard, have good analytical skills and quick learning ability, teamwork ability and communication skills; things seriously, cautious, careful, prudent, to Create more value for the Group. I am confident I meet the above quality requirements.
Four years, carefully nurtured in the school and my personal efforts, I mastered the system of financial industry expertise, excellent English proficiency, proficiency in operating the computer. In addition, I actively participated in the campus during school activities and social practice, and organizations to participate in volunteer activities, school badminton, table tennis and other sports activities, competitions, and engage in several marketing, customer service, part-time assistants to carry out more external communication links Develop team spirit and social responsibility.
I would like to work with their own practice which has the experience and knowledge and skills, as well as their own hard work, entrepreneurial spirit, for your contribution to the future development of the company.
我请外教翻译的，他说绝对不会有问题的 ，我也不知道，你自己看看吧

Answer 2

Hello!

I am shandong financial college financial institute 2011 session of undergraduates. Our school is by the ministry of finance and the shandong provincial government jointly founded the common higher financial institutions will be in 2011 March formal upgraded to shandong university of finance and economics.

I in the recent from your bank website that your line has begun to campus 2011 session during the university campus recruitment, I has been paying attention to the development of the financial industry market, also wish to join your bank. After 22 years of development, China's postal savings bank already in the general public, establish a well-known social, people trust business brand, provided the basic financial services already thorough popular feeling, becoming the important retail financial institutions. I think fit your work unit must abide by integrity, integrity, Working conscientious, isstead fast, has the good learning ability and analytical skills, teamwork and communication skill, Serious work, careful, careful and sedate, for the group to create more value. I'm confident I meet the above quality requirement.

The university for four years, in the school of professional training and my personal efforts, my system grasps the financial industry expertise, excellent English application abilities, can skilled operate a computer. In addition, during the period of school, I took an active part in the campus activities and social practice, volunteer organizations to participate in activities, the badminton, table tennis etc recreational activity competition, and engaged in many sales, customer service, assistant, part-time job more on external communication, training team consciousness and social responsibility.

I hope relying on its own with working practice experience, as well as their knowledge and skills of assiduous, enterprising spirit, for your company's future development contribute force.

Answer 3

Hello!

I am shandong financial college financial institute 2011 session of undergraduates. Our school is by the ministry of finance and the shandong provincial government jointly founded the common higher financial institutions will be in 2011 March formal upgraded to shandong university of finance and economics.

I in the recent from your bank website that your line has begun to campus 2011 session during the university campus recruitment, I has been paying attention to the development of the financial industry market, also wish to join your bank. After 22 years of development, China's postal savings bank already in the general public, establish a well-known social, people trust business brand, provided the basic financial services already thorough popular feeling, becoming the important retail financial institutions. I think fit your work unit must abide by integrity, integrity, Working conscientious, isstead fast, has the good learning ability and analytical skills, teamwork and communication skill, Serious work, careful, careful and sedate, for the group to create more value. I'm confident I meet the above quality requirement.

The university for four years, in the school of professional training and my personal efforts, my system grasps the financial industry expertise, excellent English application abilities, can skilled operate a computer. In addition, during the period of school, I took an active part in the campus activities and social practice, volunteer organizations to participate in activities, the badminton, table tennis etc recreational activity competition, and engaged in many sales, customer service, assistant, part-time job more on external communication, training team consciousness and social responsibility.

I hope relying on its own with working practice experience, as well as their knowledge and skills of assiduous, enterprising spirit, for your company's future development contribute force.

应该没有错的

Answer 4

Hello!
I am the Finance Institute of Shandong University of Finance 2011 session of the undergraduates. Our school is by the State Ministry of Finance and co-founder of People's Government of Shandong Province General Business Schools, will be held in March 2011 was upgraded to Shandong University of Finance.
I was recently informed from your line of site 2011, the Bank has started school campus recruitment session, the University I have been concerned about the financial industry during the development of the market, but also particularly like to join the Bank. After 22 years of development, China Postal Savings Bank has been established in the general public in the social well-known, business people trust the brand, providing basic financial services has gained recognition as a major retail financial institutions. I think that work for your organization must adhere to honesty, integrity; working and responsible, practical work hard, have good analytical skills and quick learning ability, teamwork ability and communication skills; things seriously, cautious, careful, prudent, to Create more value for the Group. I am confident I meet the above quality requirements.
Four years, carefully nurtured in the school and my personal efforts, I mastered the system of financial industry expertise, excellent English proficiency, proficiency in operating the computer. In addition, I actively participated in the campus during school activities and social practice, and organizations to participate in volunteer activities, school badminton, table tennis and other sports activities, competitions, and engage in several marketing, customer service, part-time assistants to carry out more external communication links Develop team spirit and social responsibility.
I would like to work with their own practice which has the experience and knowledge and skills, as well as their own hard work, entrepreneurial spirit, for your contribution to the future development of the company.
应该差不多 你自己再看看