Question

下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加，删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（

下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加，删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下面划一横线（_），并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Dear Jin Jing, Your problem is common one among middle school students. Maybe the following advices can help you. First in all, believe in yourself. Your greatest problem is that you don’t have self-confidence. The first thing you must do is to smile at your classmates. One smile speaks loud about your wish to make the friends than any word. Your smile will show that you are friendly to him. Next, trying talking with a student who is as shy as you or who share the same interest with you. You can discuss your studies with a classmate, and you can also talk about your hobbies as well. Unless someone is in trouble, you should be ready to help him or her. Once you have confidence, you can make as many friends as possibly． Yours，Lily

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Dear Jin Jing, Your problem is ∧common one among middle school students. Maybe the following a advices can help you. First in all, believe in yourself. Your greatest problem is that you advice                of don’t have self-confidence. The first thing you must do is to smile at your classmates. One smile speaks loud about your wish to make the friends than any word. Your smile will louder show that you are friendly to him. Next, trying talking with a student who is as shy as you them      try or who share the same interest with you. You can discuss your studies with a classmate, and shares you can also talk about your hobbies as well. Unless someone is in trouble, you should be When ready to help him or her. Once you have confidence, you can make as many friends as possibly． possible                                    Yours， Lily

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