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阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文. In China, with one or two parents going out

阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文. In China, with one or two parents going out to earn money, many children are left in their hometown in the countryside. These children are called “leftover children”. A large number of leftover children have emerged since 1978, and the statistics showed in 2004, the total is 22 million. Usually their grandparents or their parents’ friends or relatives look after these leftover children. Sometimes they are brought up by one of their parents at home. In most cases, their guardians are not quite educed. To them, making sure that the children are healthy and fed well is the most important task, and that the children are safe and sound is considered to have done a good job. But they seldom care about children’s study, their psychological needs, or mental demands. Neither do they spend some time teaching kids how to develop good habits. Therefore ,for most of the time, the leftover children can’t get emotional support from their parents, which can result in so many problems.写作内容1、以约30个词概括上文的内容2、然后以约120词就 “如何关心农村留守儿童（leftover children）的成长？”这个话题发表你的看法,并包括以下要点:（1）农村留守儿童存在的原因是什么？（2）你认为他们面临的最大困难是什么？（3）解决留守孩子问题的关键是什么？（4）提出解决问题的措施。写作要求1、你可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2、题目自定。

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Show More Concern about the leftover Children The passage points out a worrying phenomenon in China that the leftover children living in the countryside have lacked their parent’s love because their parents have gone to make a fortune in cities. As we all know, people living in the countryside have to work far away from their family to earn more money in order to create better living conditions for their children. However, the children have been separated from their parents and live with  their grandparents or relatives, who are not so educated. So their sudy, their mental and psychological demands can’t be drawn attention too. In that case, it’s easy for them to get into bad habits, which can’t be corrected in time. What’s worse, the lack of parents’ love may make them feel lonely. In my opinion, the key to solving the problem is to have love shinning over them. Parents should keep in touch with them now and then, and be concerned about their psychological demands.

试题分析：本文属于半开放性的作文，只是给出了大纲，要求考生根据文字的提示，自行组织要点。留守儿童的原因在于地方经济不够发达，父母外出打工无法照顾孩子，只好放在老家。留守儿童最大的困难在于教育，解决此类问题的关键在于地方政府和教育部门要有措施，要让留守儿童养成良好的学习和生活习惯。 点评：本文对于考生的谋篇布局的能力要求较高，要求考生自行组织要点，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。