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Media is a pervasive and essential way to disseminate information, which provides us with rich information and keeps us well-informed.I will talk about the advantages and disadvantages of radio, television and film.

Compared with television and film, the radio is cost-effective yet audiences do not pay too much attention to it.While the radio is cheaper, the long perspective makes the pessimistic view of its prospective makes the pessimistic view of its prospects because the radio is in retreat withstanding repeated strain from scientific advances.

As opposed to the radio, television needs more expenditure but it achieves high appeal and makes us informed the latest news and massive coverage at home or abroad.Television is also a convenient source of entertainment and entertains the audience with interesting programs.However, a negative influence on teenagers is that some messages conveyed by TV are misguiding, and children are prone to imitate and be led astray and some exaggerated advertisements misguide consumers without mentioning the side effects of the products.

With the life changing constantly in terms of technology, film has been an essential medium and we should keep pace with scientific advances.The film has remarkable visual effect with an impressive variety of exciting compositions.Although it has a high film-making expenditure, the film anticipates demands of public more precisely.

I suggest that we can pick out the most suitable medium according to different situations, when it comes to the visual effect we can take the film into account, and if we do not have too much budget, we can think about the radio.If coverage has a great quantity of objective facts, we can consider the television.

Answer 1

中午去学校时才发觉，今天天气挺好。
和旭的风吹得我感觉飘飘然的，暖暖的阳光照在身上微微感觉灼热，不过还好，受得住。
悠然得一股花香飘进鼻子，不是特别的好闻，不过我感觉很熟悉，感觉有一点亲切。我投眼望去，想搜索这花香的源头。
看见了，果然没错…油菜花。在路边的一块不大的荒地里参差的长着许多油菜花，就是那飘来的花香。仔细看，花香不仅吸引了我，还有一些可爱的小蜜蜂。
想起那些童年的日子，在油菜地里追逐、玩耍，还有抓蜜蜂，想着能酿出蜂蜜……
哈！美好的一天。

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大家不要在我这里逗比啦

大家不要在我这里逗比啦