Question

my robot 英语作文

Answer 1

综述：

She has short hair, a cute face and  small eyes. Who is she? Ha! She is my robot—Candy Girl. Candy Girl likes eating candies very much. 

There are a lot of candies in her pocket. I always get candies from her pocket. That is yum. What is Candy Girl like?

 She is clever and hard-working. She can speak Chinese and English. She helps with my study. She is strict with me. She is funny, 

too. She always makes me happy. I am good with Candy Girl. We are good friends.

Answer 2

My Robot
Last night, I had a beautiful dream.I was very excited that a robot came into my home . I called her Pink because she was wearing a pink dress.
She did all my jobs around the house . She cleaned my house ,mopped the floors , made my bed , cooked meals and dealt with my homework . whenever I asked
her, she did everything that she could so well . She never complained about her physical problems and did not need days off . I was very glad that she serviced me all the time in a day .
Suddenly, my dear Pink disappeared . As I was crying , I found a message with the following words :
My dear friend,
I am not a real girl . I was treated as if I have no fellings , but in fact I wish to be free and play like a real girl , but in your house ,I might feel I was regarded as a maid and not give any consideration like human being .
I feel I was hurt……
Goodbye , my little master .
Oh , I’m very sorry for what I did before . Pink , you are right . I should have treated you as my real friend . Please remember that robot is a member of human beings as well .
修改过了，语病没了

Answer 3

写得不错，就有些语病

Answer 4

= =确实有语病 可就他回答了哈

Answer 5

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