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英语改错题

英语改错题

I wrote a letter to Jim on last Sunday to ask for some advices

on how to be a good teacher. Soon I accepted his letter "To be a good teacher"

Jim said in his letter "you must able to hold the attention and interest of your students"

Beside,a good teacher should do what he can act what he is teaching to make its meaning clear . watch a good teacher,and you would see that he does not sit still before their class. However,a good teacher may not be able to acting well on the stage for there are very important differences between the teacher's work and the ac-tor.

可能我有打错的地方,麻烦也写出来下.

另外请您告诉我错误的原因.谢谢.

Answer 1

advices最好改成advice
因为：
1. 表示“劝告”、“忠告”、“建议”，是不可数名词，若要表示一条或几条建议或劝告，则说a piece / three pieces of advice 一条 / 三条建议。2. 表示按照某人的意见做某事，一般用介词on 或by。如：It was done on (或by) my advice. 这是按我的意见做的。3. 表示提出建议或忠告，一般用动词give；表示向某人请教或征求意见，一般用动词ask / ask for; 表示接受意见或劝告，一般用动词take / follow。如：He gave us good advice on how to learn English. 他对怎样学习英语给我们提出了很好的建议。He asked (for) the teacher’s advice. / He asked the teacher for his advice. 他向老师请教。If you take (或follow) my advice and study hard, you’ll pass the examination. 如果你听我的劝告用功读书，你就会考及格。

accepted 改成received，应该是收信而不是接受信，注意区别两个词的用法：
receive指“收到”, 着重“行为本身, 而不涉及收受者是否接受”, 如:
I received an invitation.
我收到了请帖。
accept 指“领受”, “接收”, 着重“除行为本身以外, 还表示接受者经过考虑以后愿意接受”, 如:
I accepted the invitation.
我接受邀请。

改：you must be able to

able不是动词，而是表语，所以这个句子少了谓语动词，要加进去。

Beside改Besides
beside (=next to) 例句He sat down beside Mary.
besides (=in addition to) 例句Who was there besides you?
这里的明显不是next to的意思，而是“另外”的意思。

a good teacher should do what he can act what he is teaching to make its meaning clear . 这句很有问题。给你改成“a good teacher should do what he can to act (out) what he is teaching in order to make its meaning clear.”
一个好的老师应该尽其所能表演出他正在教的东西以便于其意思清晰。

before their class 没问题，但是我会用in front of their class

may not be able to acting well on the stage 中的acting改成act
to后面跟动词原型。

the ac-tor 改成 the actor's.
前后要一致，是工作与工作之间的差别，the actor's后面省略了work，避免重复。

OK，完了，累死我了，希望能帮到你吧。

Answer 2

I wrote a letter to Jim last Sunday to ask for some advice.(advice不可数）

on how to be a good teacher. Soon I accepted his letter "To be a good teacher"

Jim said in his letter "you must be able to hold the attention and keep interest of your students"

Beside,a good teacher should do whatever he can，for example，what he is teaching should be made clear . Watching a good teacher‘s way,and you will see that he does not sit still before his class. However,a good teacher may not be able to act well on the stage because there are many differences between the teacher's work and the ac-tor.

Answer 3

第一行把on去掉，星期几前面有last/this/next等修饰词不用再加介词
（advice可以作可数名词，加s没有错）
第二行把accepted改成received，前者是接受，后者才是收到
第三行在able前面加be，must是情态动词，后面跟动词用原形，able是形容词，前面要有be动词，可以把be able to记成一个词组
第四行在can和act中间加to，do what he can的意思是尽他所能
第五行把their改成his
第六行把acting改成act，be able to后跟动词原形
最后一行把actor改成actor's，意思是老师的工作和演员的工作之间还是有很大的不同之处。
（actor中间的连字符应该是书上换行用的，打在一行上就不用可以去掉了）

你好小啊，好好学英语吧。加油！

Answer 4

你这是作文？还是改错题？
some advices about the methods of being a good teacher.
advices 后面接about

you must be able to .. be able to do sth. 有能力做某事

what he can act what he is teaching to make its meaning clear ??
这句话你的表达上有很大的错误哦
a good teacher should have the ability to show her meaning by her words and actions.
watch a good teacher 这样也是不对的 watch 用于 watch tv 看着一个好的老师?你是想要这样表达？ 其实英语里写作文时候不用完全按照中文翻译过来，要灵活点。
also, a good teacher who will never sitting in the classroom for a long time,she would walk around to make sure all the students are listening to her.

for there are very important differences between the teacher's work and the ac-tor. ?? 表述上一样有误哦

Answer 5

advices去掉S must be able 目前就看到这两个，抱歉

Answer 6

第一行：删去last Sunday 前面的on，last Sunday 前面。不需要用介词advice是不可数的，因此把advices改成advice。第二行：把accepted改成received。accepted表示接受，received才是收到。第三行：hold 单独用没有坚持的意思，应改为hold on，interest 常与介词ind搭配，不是of.第四行watch前面缺少主语，把watch改成watching,并删掉and，因为watch和后面的see拥有相同的主语，在一句话中只能有一个动词，所以ing形式使得watch这个动作成为see的一个伴随状态或者先后关系，强调see这个动作。还有would改成will,，因为上下文的时态为一般现在时，而would是wil的过去式，因此与上下文矛盾。第五行acting 改成act。be able to do something 是固定短语。for改为because，for没有连接两个句子的功能