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因为寒冷的天气，我一直睡到7：44才起床，我犯了一个错，在学习上，我希望能够努力学习，但是当我睡6：00起床时，我感到非常冷，所以我想，为什么不再多睡一会呀？而且今天是星...
因为寒冷的天气，我一直睡到7：44才起床，我犯了一个错，在学习上，我希望能够努力学习，但是当我睡6：00起床时，我感到非常冷，所以我想，为什么不再多睡一会呀？而且今天是星期六，所以我继续睡觉了！
当我睡醒之后，看看手机，哇哦，现在是7：44了，这非常迟了，我心好痛，因为我爱时间，我不想去浪费他！
最后，我的决定，或者是我的计划，算是失败了，一开始，我制定了一个计划，或者称之为规定吧，去控制我周末的时间，我希望我能有一个愉快的周末，而不是玩电脑，或者是睡觉，这很无聊，而且我们学不到什么有用的知识，而且我害怕成为一个没有用的人，我想成功，天气非常冷，但是今天有阳光，这是一件很兴奋的事情！
我现在开始写英文日志，我想过四级，而且我想我的英语说得非常好。请帮帮我！
because of the cold weather ,I sleep late until 7:44，I make a mistake for study。i hope to work hard，but when i get up in 6：00 。i feel very cold，i think ，why i sleep late a little，and today is 。so i go on to sleep .
when i asleep ,look at the mobilephone .waoh !it was very late ,now is 7:44,my heart damage ,bcause i like time ,i don't want to weaste it!
finally ,my desicion and plan is failed ,at the first of ,i made a plan ,or called the rule ,to take control my weenkend time , i wish ,i have a good in weekend ,not playing computer everyday or sleep in bed .it is boring,and we don' t helpful kowledge , and i afraid to be a unhelpful man ,i want to success !
the weather is cold ,but today have sunny ,it is a exciting things!
i start to write english ,i want to across the grade 4 of english ,and i hope to talk english and i hope to talk english very well ,please help me ! 展开
当我睡醒之后，看看手机，哇哦，现在是7：44了，这非常迟了，我心好痛，因为我爱时间，我不想去浪费他！
最后，我的决定，或者是我的计划，算是失败了，一开始，我制定了一个计划，或者称之为规定吧，去控制我周末的时间，我希望我能有一个愉快的周末，而不是玩电脑，或者是睡觉，这很无聊，而且我们学不到什么有用的知识，而且我害怕成为一个没有用的人，我想成功，天气非常冷，但是今天有阳光，这是一件很兴奋的事情！
我现在开始写英文日志，我想过四级，而且我想我的英语说得非常好。请帮帮我！
because of the cold weather ,I sleep late until 7:44，I make a mistake for study。i hope to work hard，but when i get up in 6：00 。i feel very cold，i think ，why i sleep late a little，and today is 。so i go on to sleep .
when i asleep ,look at the mobilephone .waoh !it was very late ,now is 7:44,my heart damage ,bcause i like time ,i don't want to weaste it!
finally ,my desicion and plan is failed ,at the first of ,i made a plan ,or called the rule ,to take control my weenkend time , i wish ,i have a good in weekend ,not playing computer everyday or sleep in bed .it is boring,and we don' t helpful kowledge , and i afraid to be a unhelpful man ,i want to success !
the weather is cold ,but today have sunny ,it is a exciting things!
i start to write english ,i want to across the grade 4 of english ,and i hope to talk english and i hope to talk english very well ,please help me ! 展开
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【参考修改版】Because of the cold weather, I woke up late till 7:44 am, I made a mistake on study. I hoped to work hard，but when i got up in 6：00. I felt very cold, I was thinking, why not get up a little late. And today is Saturday, so I went on sleeping.
When I was awake, looking at my mobilephone, my godness! It was so late, 7:44 am, my heart was damaged ,bcause I like time, I don't want to waste it!
Finally, my desicion and plan were not successful. At the beginning, I made a plan, or could be called a rule, to schedule my weekend time, I wished that I would had a good in weekend, not playing computer everyday or sleeping to early. It was boring,and we didn' get helpful knowledge, and I was afraid to be useless man, so I want to be successfull!
The weather has been cold, but today we have a sunny day, it is a exciting thing!
[建议]如果要为考四级做准备的话，建议除了平常多写多做练习外，背诵四级范文，有空可以来我们论坛看看。
When I was awake, looking at my mobilephone, my godness! It was so late, 7:44 am, my heart was damaged ,bcause I like time, I don't want to waste it!
Finally, my desicion and plan were not successful. At the beginning, I made a plan, or could be called a rule, to schedule my weekend time, I wished that I would had a good in weekend, not playing computer everyday or sleeping to early. It was boring,and we didn' get helpful knowledge, and I was afraid to be useless man, so I want to be successfull!
The weather has been cold, but today we have a sunny day, it is a exciting thing!
[建议]如果要为考四级做准备的话，建议除了平常多写多做练习外，背诵四级范文，有空可以来我们论坛看看。
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