英语短文改错When i was a senior student in high school i had teach?
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1.I had (a) teacher called...
2.二段中but改为and
3.三段中effect on me(把to改为on)
4.四段中poster改为posters
5.五段中taught we(把we改为us)
6.六段中passed away several years before(before改为ago)
7.七段中,how a (how-what)
8.have been known her,去掉been
9.as her ,as改为like,8,When i was a senior student in high school i had a teacher called mary.she taught english well and she really had an important effect to me.she was full of love and passion.she had our class made post...,1,英语短文改错
When i was a senior student in high school i had teacher called mary.she taught english well but she really had an important effect to me.she was full of love and passion.she had our class make poster and hang them around the school.she taught we that one act of kindness can go a long way.however.mary passed away just several years before after a long battle with breast cancer.i`ll never forget how a wonderful and sweet lady she was.i am truly blessed to have been known her.i am going to be a teacher as her and i`ll aways remember her kindness.
2.二段中but改为and
3.三段中effect on me(把to改为on)
4.四段中poster改为posters
5.五段中taught we(把we改为us)
6.六段中passed away several years before(before改为ago)
7.七段中,how a (how-what)
8.have been known her,去掉been
9.as her ,as改为like,8,When i was a senior student in high school i had a teacher called mary.she taught english well and she really had an important effect to me.she was full of love and passion.she had our class made post...,1,英语短文改错
When i was a senior student in high school i had teacher called mary.she taught english well but she really had an important effect to me.she was full of love and passion.she had our class make poster and hang them around the school.she taught we that one act of kindness can go a long way.however.mary passed away just several years before after a long battle with breast cancer.i`ll never forget how a wonderful and sweet lady she was.i am truly blessed to have been known her.i am going to be a teacher as her and i`ll aways remember her kindness.
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