Question

英语对话修改！！错误太多，求高手帮忙！

Test 5
If you were a boss, what kind of employees would you choose first: those who are professionally proficient or those who are loyal to the company? Why?
A: I'm glad to see you. Recently I met a very difficult question; perhaps you could let me know.
B: You are highly of me, I would be happy to answer your questions.
A: Thank you, my question is:” If you were a boss, what kind of employees would you choose first: those who are professionally proficient or those who are loyal to the company?”
B: That's for sure; such talented person is really useful to me. For the professional master is the cornerstone of the development of the company forward; and loyal to the company is the company don't stop the premise.
A: Your idea wonderful, but don't know how you can reasonable management they let you of the company to obtain the biggest benefit.
B: This is my best at, I am according to the characteristics of everyone, then take them assigned to different organizations, let them in their own right positions display function.
A: I admire your talent, and after you have your company will surely develop very well！
B: If I want to do something I'll put yourself fully devoted to it!
A: Well, I will learn from you this attitude.
B: OK, bye!
Test 6
What do you think of the “empty-nest” family in China?
A: What do you think of the “empty-nest” family in China?
B: First have to know basic reason; it is because of China's population is too much.
A: The population of China is indeed a lot, but have what relation?
B: Obviously! A family of person many there is not enough space lives, So in order to live one part person will go to other places, they tend to be young.
A: But the rest of the people? No relatives in the side they will alone.
B: You said left home the old people? So that is a problem! Not very perfect thing.
A: Those who go out should often go home, this problem is not big.
B: Yes, but to see if they can do it often home to see his parents.
A: Maybe, They always have reason not to go home.
B: So that's the case.
Test 7
The problem of waste is very serious on campus. What can we personally do to reduce waste on campus?
A: You see the classroom still lights on?
B: Yes, the university campus waste electricity phenomenon is more and more serious.
A: En, Yes, every day I dorm mates are open computer late, are doing the wrong things. So actually wasted a lot of electricity.
B: That you? You so waste electricity?
A: No, I've long sleep. I don't like very late have to do other things.
B: True good, because you keep good energy saving electricity again. But students not used in the classroom the lights on.
A: You should like I do. On the other hand, we could do with some save electricity propaganda, let everybody cherish resources.
B: That's a good idea, should carry out as soon as possible.
A: But nobody willing to to organize such events ah .You know I don't have time.
B: Oh, This is the true problem.

Answer 1

Test 5：
第一行中-----Choose 是动词，应该用副词来修饰，所以应该是firstly。还有，those是修饰性的代词，不能直接这样用，把它改成the people 吧。
第三行中----那个A君说的话里面，know的意思是“了解”，而不仅仅是“知道”。所以这句话最好改成：Maybe you can give me a answer.
第四行中----B君说的话里，你是想表达“高度评价”或者谦虚的回答“您谬赞了”的意思么？如果是的话，应该用这个短语：speek highly of sb. 或是think highly of sb.此外，这行的末尾用的是“questions”，前面A君说的是“a question”，所以后面应该改成单数，因为已经有了your来修饰question了，所以不必加上a，直接去掉原文中的s即可。
下面的同样的问题。
接着是第七行中----B君的回答里，That is for sure.我没见过这样的表达方式，抱歉我目前没办法很好的跟你解释清楚，但我敢肯定这是错了的。如果是在写作中，你可以写成“It's no dout that ....”省略号部分写入你后面要表达的观点就行了。Person是可数名词，而且前面用了such，所以talented前应该加上一个a。还有，“对我而言”应该是“for me”而不是“to me”。
For the professional master的后面应该加上你想表达的成分，否则 is the cornerstone of就缺少主语，成了the master是cornerstone。 “the development of the company forward;”应该改为“developing”，没有原文中的那种表达方式。