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朋友，帮忙抽空给我把英语备考作文看一下，揪揪错，急的，下个礼拜要考试了！！就是语法问题，我是6A的学

初中预备班英语笔试兼口试的备考作文：（共7篇）
1. My family
There are three people in my family. There are my father, mother and me. My mother is beautiful. She likes shopping very much. She usually goes shopping with my father. My father is strong. He likes sports very much. He often goes swimming with me. My parents love me and I love them, too.

2. A trip to Space Museum
This Sunday, I will go to Space Museum with my friends. We will get there by bus. We will meet at the school gate at one o’clock in the afternoon. The Space Museum is wonderful and we all hope to visit it. We will see many spaceship models. We’re going come back at about four o’clock. It will cost us 100 Yuan. I think we will have a nice trip.

3. What would you like to be?
I would like to be a policeman because I want to make our city a safe place. To be a policeman mast has a strong body, run fast and healthy. I like sports and I usually run, swim, play badminton, play tennis and so on. I think I will be strong.

4. Open Day
Yesterday was Open day in our school. My parents will arrived at nine o’clock. First, they looked at our morning exercise on the playground. Then they visited our classroom. Next, they looked at our class project in our classroom. After that, they listened to the school choir in the hall at the first floor at half past eleven. Finally, they had lunch in the music room.

5. Rules round us
We need a lot of rules in our life. We have them in the park, in the classroom or on the road. For example: Don’t smoke! Don’t talk loudly! Don’t run! Don’t eat or drink and so on. They can make our city a safe and better place. They’re very useful!

6. Picnics are fun
I usually have a picnic with my friends on Saturday afternoon. We often have the picnic in the park because it’s beautiful. We always eat some delicious food and have some soft drinks. We share our food and talk about our problems. We like playing together and laughing together. Picnics are fun, because we can eat a lot and play a lot.

7. Healthy diet
I usually have porridge for breakfast. I usually have a lot of rice, some meat and only a little sugar for lunch and dinner. I think my diet is healthy. We should drink plenty of water everyday, because a good diet will make us strong.
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Answer 1

1. My family
There are three members in my family. There are my father, mother and I. My mother is beautiful. She likes shopping very much. And she usually goes shopping with my father. My father is strong. He likes doing sports very much.And he often goes swimming with me. My parents love me and I love both of them, too.
给你把第一个简单修改了。。。

Answer 2

基本上都是语法错误

Answer 3

好像没什么问题

Answer 4

好多语法问题

Answer 5

没设么大问题，就是句式重复太严重。。。