Question

写了篇英语作文 不知有没有错误 请帮忙斧正

Dear sir / madam
Welcome you visit distances arrived in San Francisco,
and thank you for our company's support. So far our cooperation relationship has remained for five years, is always mutual reciprocity and mutual benefit, mutual help .And hope our cooperation relationship to go further .Tonight, we have prepared a great dinner,we hope you can come to dinner. We are ready to organizers in your hotel shuttle you. The restaurant we often, they do the food is delicious. Here have also held many important meetings, made a lot of business talks. Therefore we want here to inviting.Time is PM on Saturday afternoon, phil monte hotel waiting at the door your arrival. We sincerely welcome your arrival .

Your best friend
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Answer 1

修改如下，格式和用词语法都改了。

Dear sir / madam
Welcome you visit distances arrived in San Francisco,
and thank you for your company's support. So far our cooperation relationship has been remained for five years, which is always mutual reciprocity and mutual benefit, mutual helpful .And hope our cooperation relationship to go further .Tonight, we will prepare a great dinner,we hope you can come to dinner. We are ready to organize it in your hotel and shuttle you. we often go to the restaurant , and the food they do is delicious. many important meetings have been also held , a lot of business talks have been made . Therefore we want to invite you there. the Time is PM on Saturday afternoon, phil monte hotel waiting at the door for your arrival. We sincerely welcome your arrival .

your best friend
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Answer 2

说实话错误挺多的