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大家帮帮我，高分悬赏阿！！！！！

帮我检查一下又没有错误~~谢谢阿！！！！！

Today is the Spring Festival. I spent a happy day. Tonight we have family meals together, we have a lot of blessings. Eaten after dinner, I watched the Spring Festival Gala, I really loved that. To 11:00 minutes, firecrackers sports, the excitement, showing a picture, I love the motherland. I personally was most impressive in the process of the dumplings, this is not my first attempt, we went off smoothly. I very carefully wrapped, Snaddon dumplings, I seem to eat very fragrant! Spring Festival on this later, but this day is the happiest day of my holiday.
今天是春节。我度过了开心的一天。晚上，我们全家人一起吃饭，大家都互相祝福。吃完饭后，我收看了春节联欢晚会，我非常喜欢。到了11点钟，鞭炮声陆续响起了，北京呈现出热闹的景象，我更加热爱祖国了。最令人难忘的就是我亲手包饺子的过程了，这并不是我的第一次尝试，所以还算顺利，我小心翼翼的包着，那顿饺子，我似乎也吃得格外香！
春节就这样过去了，但是这一天，是我假期中最快乐的一天，我爱春节

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重写吧！
除了第一个句子勉强，其他几乎都是错的！