Question

英语写作

请高手帮忙写篇英语作文
要求是：TOM现在读大学一年级（中国人），向他的好朋友jack述说他是怎样学习大学英语的，学英语中遇到的困难，以及向jack请教怎样学好大学英语，。（文章开头最好写简单介绍下tom在大学的情况以及对大学的感觉）
作文是英语信件的格式，大一水平，120词左右，谢谢！
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Answer 1

Dear Jack,
I'd like to tell you that I'm proud and happy to be a university student. You know I really enjoy studying and talking with friendly people in college. Now, my dream came true.
Since I've been here for a period of time, I do like the life that was on my own. And I also did a good job in some subjects. However, I found I have some problems in learning English.
The first problem I have to concour is grammar. I made lots of garmmar mistakes in speaking and writing, And, since that, writing is another headache for me. I always have no idea about how to put across my thoughts and feelings in the right way, Finally, I really want you to give me some suggestions in listening, Beacuse I hardly understand the slant and phrases when listening the tape, especially,the speed is fast. What I need to do to improve my English level? I need your help.
I will be very obligad if you help me with such problems, Thank you anain!

yours sincerly,
Tom

Answer 2

Hello,
Jack,
I'm Tom, I'm a university, I think college to I feel good and I'm interested in learning feeling. But Jack, I feel my English is not very good, I want to ask you is how to learn English? Such I learn English, I everyday to go to the library every day through books, cognitive new words, often go to social practice my English, but my English is still not so good, so I want to ask you, you can tell me? Thank you.

Best wishes
Your friend Tom