Question

英语高手，我又来啦，帮我看看我翻译的文章怎样

文章主要写关于中国学习英语低龄化的思考。随着中国国际化脚步的加快，英语作为一种重要的交流工具，其地位日渐凸显出来。英语教育的低龄化成为我国英语教育活动的一种趋势、
这篇文章主要从四个方面来分析，(一) 英语学习低龄化现象，(二)导致英语学习低龄化趋势的原因。(三)英语学习低龄化现象带来的后果，(四)该如何引导这种现象的发展
毫无疑问，随着社会的进一步发展，英语已经与我们的生活越来越紧密，所以学好英语是非常必要的.
The article mainly focuses on the topics of that the thought about learning eglish lowering age in China.With the rapid step in Chinese internationalization,English as a essential communication tool,its status has become more and more important. Education of learning English lowering age in China turns into a trend of English education in our nation.
This article primarily analyzes from four aspects that 1、The phenomenon of learning English lowering age;2、The cause of resulting in learning English lowering age ;3、The consequence of learning English lowering age will bring about;4、how to conduct the development of this phenomenon.
There is no denying that with the more development in our society,English has become more intimate with our daily life.Therefore,trying our besr to learning English is imperative to us.

Answer 1

第一行的English拼写有误，第二行的冠词a应该为an，
学习英语低龄化应该为learning eglish at lowering age
第一段最后一句话，因为前面已经说in China了，所以后面就不必说 in our nation了
第二段的第四点“引导发展”最好不用conduct这个词，而用lead

Answer 2

第一行的English拼写错了，第二行应该是“English as an essential”
低龄化是 trend towards younger ages
最后的引导应该写成guide好些

Answer 3

This article mainly written about Chinese learning English DiLingHua thinking. As China international steps speeding up, English as a kind of important tool of communication, their status gradually emerges. English education of DiLingHua become China's English education activity of a kind of trend,

This article mainly from the four aspects of analysis, (1) English learning DiLingHua phenomenon, (2) lead to English learning DiLingHua trend of reason. (3) English learning about the consequences of a DiLingHua phenomenon, and (4) how to guide the development of this kind of phenomenon

No doubt, along with society's further development, English has and our life will be more and more closely, therefore, learn English well is very necessary.

Answer 4

Your work is merely a literally Chinese translation. Need some surgeries.

1. What is the <thought> about <lowering age>?
2. With the <rapid step >in Chinese <internationalization>,English as a essential communication tool? English is a language not a tool.
3. Education of learning English lowering age in China turns into a trend of English education in our nation?? It seems that you are using a translation machine...
4. English has become more intimate with our daily life.?? Intimate ? what is that all about?

Answer 5

翻译的挺好 、 只是有些地方不太对的上号