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光明中学依山傍水,校园安静美丽,一年前建了一个化工厂,你是该学校学生,请根据下表给本市的报社编辑写信,反映问题,呼吁有关部门采取措施,制止污染.表建立化工厂前;校园内树木...
光明中学依山傍水,校园安静美丽,一年前建了一个化工厂,你是该学校学生,请根据下表给本市的报社编辑写信,反映问题,呼吁有关部门采取措施,制止污染.
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建立化工厂前;校园内树木常青,鲜花争艳,校园安静美似花园.
建立化工厂后;工厂的废水,废气影响的师生的健康,噪音影响了教学,师生苦不堪言.
你的名字的李华,日期07.01.10
100词
请教教我应怎么写!
怪我没说清,我是高3的啊!!
不好意思啊!!
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建立化工厂前;校园内树木常青,鲜花争艳,校园安静美似花园.
建立化工厂后;工厂的废水,废气影响的师生的健康,噪音影响了教学,师生苦不堪言.
你的名字的李华,日期07.01.10
100词
请教教我应怎么写!
怪我没说清,我是高3的啊!!
不好意思啊!!
希望多帮忙 展开
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Dear Sir/Madam,
I am a student from Guangming Middle School in our city. In this letter, I want to tell you something serious. Our school used to be very quiet and beautiful with green mountains and clear water around it. Also, the air was very fresh and the flowers were very beautiful.
But a year ago, a chemical factory was built near our school, everythins has been changed since then.The polluted air and water made by this factory continues affecting our health, and the noise coming from the factory makes teaching very difficult. Both the teachers and students have been suffering from it!
We sincerely hope you can help us take measures to protect our school and stop it from being polluted.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
July 1st 2007
已经修改过了,虽然你是高三的,但是太专业的词还是不用的最好!
PS:最后一段的第一句话应该空格,还有名字和日期应该在靠近右手边的地方,这里排版不方便,不好意思!
I am a student from Guangming Middle School in our city. In this letter, I want to tell you something serious. Our school used to be very quiet and beautiful with green mountains and clear water around it. Also, the air was very fresh and the flowers were very beautiful.
But a year ago, a chemical factory was built near our school, everythins has been changed since then.The polluted air and water made by this factory continues affecting our health, and the noise coming from the factory makes teaching very difficult. Both the teachers and students have been suffering from it!
We sincerely hope you can help us take measures to protect our school and stop it from being polluted.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
July 1st 2007
已经修改过了,虽然你是高三的,但是太专业的词还是不用的最好!
PS:最后一段的第一句话应该空格,还有名字和日期应该在靠近右手边的地方,这里排版不方便,不好意思!
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Dear editor,
I'm a student of Guang Ming Middle School. Our school used to …
Dear editor,
I'm a student of Guang Ming Middle School. Our school
used to be very beautiful. There used to be green trees and
all kinds of flowers in our school all the year around. It used
to be a quite place and it was a good place for study.
Things have changed since a chemical works was built
Near our school a year ago. Every day they produce large
quantities of waste water and harmful gases. The terrible
pollution has done great harm to us as well as to the trees
and flowers. And the great noise from the works has greatly affected our teaching and studying activities. Our school is no longer a quiet and good place for study. We suffer a lot from
the pollution.
We do hope you can help us to take measures to protect our school and stop it from being polluted.
Yours truly,
I'm a student of Guang Ming Middle School. Our school used to …
Dear editor,
I'm a student of Guang Ming Middle School. Our school
used to be very beautiful. There used to be green trees and
all kinds of flowers in our school all the year around. It used
to be a quite place and it was a good place for study.
Things have changed since a chemical works was built
Near our school a year ago. Every day they produce large
quantities of waste water and harmful gases. The terrible
pollution has done great harm to us as well as to the trees
and flowers. And the great noise from the works has greatly affected our teaching and studying activities. Our school is no longer a quiet and good place for study. We suffer a lot from
the pollution.
We do hope you can help us to take measures to protect our school and stop it from being polluted.
Yours truly,
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Dear Sir/Madam;
Firstly, thank you very much for paying attention to my letter! I hope what i'm going to say will be impressive to you and can be spreaded out to all who are conerning our enviornment.
I'm a student of Guang Ming Middle School. We used to have a beatiful campus which is facing the lake and against the hill. It's like a garden cause there are so many trees and flowers. We love our school so much. Unfortunately, this scenario dosen't exist any more. A year ago, a chemical plant was built up just beside our school, and everything was changed since then. Wasted water, toxic gas and annoying noise kept coming out from the plant. All of these hazards seriously affected our health. Many people got sick frequently, and the normal operation of the school was interrupted.
So hereby, i sincerely hope that the authority of enviornment could take special attention to this problem and take action to prevent our health and our school from sufferring hazards.
Best Regards
Li Hua
July, 1st, 2007
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Firstly, thank you very much for paying attention to my letter! I hope what i'm going to say will be impressive to you and can be spreaded out to all who are conerning our enviornment.
I'm a student of Guang Ming Middle School. We used to have a beatiful campus which is facing the lake and against the hill. It's like a garden cause there are so many trees and flowers. We love our school so much. Unfortunately, this scenario dosen't exist any more. A year ago, a chemical plant was built up just beside our school, and everything was changed since then. Wasted water, toxic gas and annoying noise kept coming out from the plant. All of these hazards seriously affected our health. Many people got sick frequently, and the normal operation of the school was interrupted.
So hereby, i sincerely hope that the authority of enviornment could take special attention to this problem and take action to prevent our health and our school from sufferring hazards.
Best Regards
Li Hua
July, 1st, 2007
用了些专业术语, 希望对楼主有帮助.
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