这我写的2013年6月英语四级作文，这我模拟练习的，希望有大神帮忙点评下，作文15分，我这篇能拿几分？
The picture has showed the general problem in our life.The teacher teach us knowledge and skills,but they often ignore that reading literature is also important.
Nowadays students go to school for exams,so teachers teach them how to get good grades.Most of them are not emphasized to reading literature,because it is no useful to take exam.But in my opinions,it is essential to reading literature.For example,A spend all his time on study,so he has good grades.But B often reads literature during holiday.Compare A to B ,we can find that B would be more confident one ,and he will be more easier to get success than A.Because B knows how to get along with people and how to get a rest in busy life.
From now on,I think schools should pay more attention to reading literature.Literature is to us what water to fishes. It can enrich us.And When we are reading literature, we are reading our culture actually.To sum up,all of us shouldn’t ignore reading literature.
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The importance of reading literature（1）
The picture has shown(2) the general problem in our life.The teacher teach us knowledge and skills,but they often ignore that reading literature is also important.
Nowadays students go to school mainly(3) for exams, and thus(4) teachers teach them how to get good grades. Most of them are not emphasized to reading literary works(5), because it is not(6) useful for taking exams(7). However, in my opinion, it is essential to reading literature. For example, A spend all his time on study, so he has good grades. In contrary(8), B often reads literature during holidays. Comparing(9) A to B ,we can find that B would be more confident than A(10), and he will be more easier to reach(11) success than A, Because B knows how to get along with people and how to get a rest in busy life.
From now on,I think teachers(12) should put more stress(13) on reading literature. Literature is to us what water to fish（14）. It can enrich our knowledge. And When we are reading litareture, we are learning(15) our culture actually.To sum up,all of us shouldn’t ignore reading literature.
拼写啊，大姐，题目抄错了。
不规则动词变过去式
mainly大多数，并不是所有人。增加你的词汇广度
三单，加es
so没有中文那么常用，改成and thus。
not 不是no
to改成for表示目的。后边的去e加ing，考试要加复数。
加一个，增加作文亮点。
句首怎么用原型？这里不是祈使句。肯定是去e加ing的。
A be more +adj +thanB句型，好好熟悉熟悉，以后大有用处。
get 换成reach 好点
中文里说是学校，真正的还是老师，学校是个集合名词。
你用的可以，但是谁应该更注重读文学呢？你没有说明白。改成我的，就不要施动者了。
这是个很好的句型，特殊强调下。你用的是对的，但是fish怎么加es呢?不可数。
建议改成learning 不改问题也不大。
可能我有个别字母打错了，不懂就追问。然后满意请采纳！~
