Question

帮忙看看这篇英语作文，看看有没有错误，帮忙改一下，顺便翻译成中文

Mydog Look atthe picture. This is my lovely dog.Its name is bobby. It has brown fur.A pair of watery big eyeswith a hint of sagacity.Wet nose said it was very healthy.Robust limbs to makeit look strong and handsome.Every time I see it want to give it a hug. Came home every day,it will be shaking itstail,jumping excitedly, barking welcomed. It likes to sleep.Most of the time,it will huddledsleep in the its house.Sometimes snore.If I have any action,it will beimmediately wake up,slightly raised head,looked warily around.at that time itlooks like a fox. Bobby have a meal is very funny.Most of thetime it was sit to eat,sometimes it will be lying down to eat.And it was often slylook at me,if I come,it will immediately low head,ward off its own bowl,lest Igrab it food. I very love Bobby,Bobby is also love me. But I see online recently,there wera a lot ofabuse the picture of the dog.I am very heartache.Dog without friend,it is onlyus.So we should be kind to them,love them,don't hurt them!
帮帮忙，谢谢了！

Answer 1

错误很多。最大的问题是时态问题，不应该使用过去式和将来时态。因为写狗的习惯性动作等，需要使用一般现在时态。另外，最好是用拟人来写，用He 代替it 更好。此外，中国式英语表达得太多，很多不符合英语的句式。

Look atthe picture---Look at the picture。
Its name is bobby--It's name is Bobby.
eyeswith-- eyes with .
Wet nose said i twas ---Wet nose shows it is
Robust limbs to makeit look strong and handsome--it lookS strong and handsome with...
Every time I see it want to give it a hug---I want to give it a hug when I see it
Came home every day----Every day when I come back home
it will be shaking itstail----it shaks its tail
It likes to sleep--- It likes sleeping
it will huddledsleep in the its house---it - huddls and sleeps in the it's house
Sometimes snore-- Sometimes it snores
If I have any action,it will beimmediately wake up--If I do something ,it can wake up immediately slightly raised head---- raiseing head slightly
looked warily ---looking warily
Bobby have a meal is very funny--it is very funny when Bobby has a meal
Most of the time it was sit to eat--Most of time it sit to eat
it will be lying down to eat--- it lies down to eat
And it was often sly--And it isvery sly
,if I come,it will immediatelylow head --It put down its head immediately when I come
ward off its own bowl,lest Igrab it food---catching its own bowl to keep it food
I very love Bobby,Bobby is also love me-- I love Bobby very much and Bobby also loves me

But I see online recently,there wera a lot ofabuse the picture of the dog.I am very heartache.----
But there are a lot of injurious pictures of dogs online recently .I am very heartache at it .
Dog out friend,it is onlyus.So we should be kind to them,love them,don't hurt them!-----Dogs are our friends.So we should be kind to them and love them.Please don't hurt them!

翻译就比较简单了，相信你们自己可以搞定的。

Answer 2

My dog
Look at the picture. This is my lovely dog.Its name is bobby. It has brown fur.A pair of watery big eyeswith a hint of sagacity.Wet nose said it was very healthy.Robust limbs to makeit look strong and handsome.I want to give it a hug Every time I see it. Every day when I come back home,it will be shaking its tail,jumping excitedly, barking welcomed. It likes to sleep.Most of the time,it will huddled sleep in the its house.Sometimes snore.If I have any action,it will beimmediately wake up,slightly raised head,looked warily around.at that time itlooks like a fox. Bobby have a meal is very funny.Most of thetime it was sit to eat,sometimes it will be lying down to eat.And it was often sly look at me,if I come,it will immediately low head,ward off its own bowl,lest Igrab it food. I very love Bobby,Bobby is also love me. But I see online recently,there are a lot of abuse pictures of the dog.I am very heartache.Dog without friend,it is only us.So we should be kind to them,love them,don't hurt them!

我的狗狗
看看图片。这是我可爱的狗。它的名字是鲍比。有棕色的皮毛。一双水汪汪的大眼透出淡淡的睿智。湿润的鼻子说明它是非常健康的。粗壮的四肢使其看上去很英俊。每次我看到它想给它一个拥抱。每天回家，它都会摇着尾巴，兴奋地跳跃，狂吠的欢迎。它喜欢睡觉。大多数时候，它都在它的小房子里睡着。有时打鼾。如果我有任何行动，它将被唤醒，微微抬起头，警惕地看，那个时候它看起来像一只狐狸。鲍比吃饭很有趣。大部分时间是坐着吃，有时会躺下来吃。它经常偷偷的看着我，如果我来了，它会立即低下了头，避开自己的碗，以免我抢它的食物。我很爱鲍比，鲍比也爱我。但我在网上看到最近有很多残害狗的照片。我很心痛。狗没有朋友，它只属于我们。所以我们要善待他们，爱他们，不要伤害他们！

Answer 3

我的狗狗，看这个照片。 这是我的可爱的狗，名字叫波比。狗的毛发为棕色。一双水汪汪的大眼眼透着灵性。潮湿的鼻子表面它很健康。强壮的四肢使它看起来起强壮神武。每次见到我都忍不住抱抱它。每当我回到家，它都会摇动尾尾巴，欢快的蹦跶，汪汪的前来迎接。它喜欢睡觉。一天的大部分时候，它都是窝在自己的窝里睡觉。有时候会打呼噜。。。如果我有一点动静，它就会立刻惊醒(it will immdediately wake up)，稍稍抬头，机警的环视四周，神态像极了一只狐狸。波比吃饭的时候很有趣（when bobby have the meal, it looks funny.）多数时候，波比坐着吃饭，有时候会躺着吃。它还时不时偷偷的瞄我一眼，一旦我接近，它就会低头护住盘子，生怕我抢走了它的食物。我很爱波比，波比也很喜欢我。但是最近我在网上看见好多虐狗的图片。我很心痛。

狗没有朋友，只有我们？？？？ 是想表达狗是人类忠诚的朋友么？ dog is our loyal friend

我们应该善待它们，善待它们，请不要伤害他们！

Answer 4

1.Every time I see it want to give it a hug.改为I want to give it a hug when i see it every time
2.Came home every day,it will be shaking itstail,jumping excitedly, barking welcomed.改为 It will shake its tail,jump excitedly and bark welcomed when I come home every day.
3.it will huddledsleep in the its house.Sometimes snore.改为it will be huddled in its house and will snore sometimes.
4.slightly raised head,looked warily around.改为slightly raising headand looking around warily
5.Bobby have a meal is very funny改为Bobby having a meal is very funny
6.Most of thetime it was sit to eat,改为Most of the time it was sitting to eat
7.And it was often slylook at me,if I come,it will immediately low head,ward off its own bowl,lest Igrab it food. 改为And it was often sly looking at me when I come,it will immediately low head warding off its own bowl, to lest I grab its food.
8. I very love Bobby,Bobby is also love me.改为I love Bobby very much and it also loves me
9.But I see online recently,there wera a lot of abuse the picture of the dog.改为Recently online,there are a lot of the pictures of the abused dog
10.I am very heartache改为 I am very pained
11.Dog without friend,it is onlyus.So we should be kind to them,love them,don't hurt them!改为
Dogs have no friends,and there is only us. So we should be kind to them and love them and don't hurt them!
我的狗看看这幅画。这是我可爱的小狗。它的名字叫鲍比。它有棕色的皮毛。一双水汪汪的大眼睛与淡淡的睿智。湿润的鼻子说： 这是非常健康。四肢粗壮，使它看起来强壮又英俊。每次我见到它想要给它一个拥抱。回到家，每一天，这将是摇动它的尾巴，兴奋地跳，吠叫的欢迎。它喜欢睡觉。大多数情况下，它会缩成一团睡在自己的房子。有时会打鼾。如果我有任何行动，它将立即醒来，稍抬起头，谨慎地左右看。在那个时候，它看起来像一只狐狸。鲍比吃一顿饭是很滑稽。大部分时间是坐下来吃，有时它会躺着吃。它经常是狡猾的看着我，如果我来，它就会立刻低下了头，抵挡它自己的碗，免得我抓住它的食物。我非常爱鲍比，鲍比也是爱我。但最近，我看到网上有叛徒大量的虐待狗的图片。我是很心痛。狗没有朋友，就只有我们。所以我们应该善待他们，爱他们，不要伤害他们 ！

Answer 5

建议把it改为he/she以及its改为his/her

Mydog
Look at the picture. This is my lovely dog.Its name is Bobby. It has brown fur, a pair of watery big eyes with a hint of sagacity.It is said that set nose shows its being very healthy.Robust limbs to make it good look and handsome. Whenever I see it I want to give it a hug. When come home every day, it will be shaking its tail, jumping excitedly, barking welcomed. It likes sleeping.Most of the time, it sleeps in the its house.Sometimes it snore.If I have any action,it will beimmediately wake up,slightly raised head,looked warily around. At that time it looks like a fox. Bobby is very funny when having its meal. Most of the time it sits to eat, sometimes it will be lying down to eat.And it was often slylook at me,if I come,it will immediately low head,ward off its own bowl,lest Igrab it food. I very love Bobby, Bobby loves me also. But I see online recently,there were a lot of abuse of the dog.I am heartache of this very much.Dog has no other friend except us.So we should be kind to them,love them, and don't hurt them!