Question

while camping last month,my father的短文改错

Answer 1

My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He
wanted teach me about animals, insects and trees. My uncles all come
along with bows and arrows for hunting.
One evening at sunset,
we sat by the fire, have our barbecue. Just then a bird was flying over
us. My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird.
Neither of the arrows hit the target. Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky — they were looked like rain! We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.
That day I didn’t learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity!
1.【答案】wanted后面加to
【解析】固定搭配want to do sth想要做某事；to是不能省略的，不定式to do sth作为want的宾语。
2. 【答案】come改为came
【解析】根据本文第一句可知讲述的是过去发生的事情，所以使用一般过去时，所以使用came。
3. 【答案】have改为having
【解析】本句中动词have与句子主语we构成逻辑上的主动关系，所以使用现在分词在句中做状语。
4. 【答案】immediate改为immediately
【解析】本句中应该使用副词immeately来修饰谓语动词jumped，在句中做状语。形容词immediate不能做状语。
5. 【答案】on改为at
【解析】固定搭配shoot..at…不能使用介词on。At表示瞄准的对方或者方向。
6. 【答案】Neither改为none
【解析】代词neither表示两者都不…；而本句中没有提及两者，应该是有很多的鸟。故使用none表示三者或者三者以上的全部否定。
7. 【答案】was改为were
【解析】本句的主语是复数名词arrows，所以谓语动词使用复数形式were。
8 【答案】去掉were或者looked
【解析】本句是指箭如雨下，要么使用look like看起来像..；要么使用be like…像…一样。
9. 【答案】but改为and
【解析】我们四处逃跑，很幸运的是没有人受伤。根据上下文语境可知表示并列关系。
10. 【答案】a改为an
【解析】后面的形容词impressive是以元音开始的，所以使用an。