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各位大虾帮帮忙 谢谢了 翻译下英文

会员寄语： 热情欢迎阁下成为唯客丽晶国际大酒店嘉宾俱乐部中尊贵的一员！ 成为唯客丽晶国际大酒店的会员将享受到住房、美食的优惠，积分奖励，以及其它尊崇权益，将体验到更加方便快捷、周到细致的服务，彰显尊贵身份。 为确保阁下知悉会员权益及积分计划，请详细阅读此手册。

Answer 1

For VIP: Welcome to be one of our sincere members of VIP Club in Weike Regency International Hotel. A VIP of Weike Regency International Hotel enjoys the exclusive privileges in accommodation, food and reward points, which will offer more convenient and thoughtful services for you and indicate the VIP’s membership. To guarantee that you know all the privileges and reward points program, please read this manual carefully.

Answer 2

为你提供正确、地道的译文。可以说，用来精美的语言和最符合英美习惯的表达方式，完全去掉中式英文的弊病。唯一需要你核对的，是旅馆现有的英文名字，因为这个是不能重译的。

同时建议，这么重要的信息，甚至还是企业生意，理当提供悬赏分或奖励分吧？尊重一下我们翻译的劳动吧。

如能有朝一日获邀光临贵酒店，相信可以提出翻译方面的建设性建议，使你们的对外形象大大改观。我曾有幸为贵省的正副省长当过翻译。

To Our Prospective VIP Members:
We warmly invite you to welcome an honoured member of the VIP Club of the Weike Regency International Hotel. As a VIP member of Weike Regency International Hotel, you will enjoy discounts for accommodation and food, reward points and other the exclusive privileges. You will also experience even more convenient, expeditious and thoughtful services as befit your VIP status. To kindly peruse this brochure to apprise yourself with the privileges and reward points program for our VIP members. Thank you.

Answer 3

Member Message: warm welcome to you as CD-off Regent International Hotel guests in the distinguished members of the club! CD-off to become a member of the Regent International Hotel will enjoy the housing, food concessions, reward points, and other respected rights, will experience faster and more convenient, considerate service, highlight the distinguished status. To ensure that you aware of rights and Rewards member, please read this manual.
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