Question

English英语

帮我看看这里有没有错
We'll hold a summer camp and a teacher is wanted now.
Do you age from 18 to 25 years?If your ranging in age from 18 to 25 years will join us.Do you good at singing?Can you dance?Can you speak English?Can you help children with swim?Are you a woman?If you meet the above conditions join us!
If you get quite well with children and believe you are the one for us, please contact us with tel: 88456911.

这是我写的作文，不知道对不对

Answer 1

应该说是有很多错误，呵呵！a teacher wanted to join usnow;年龄 应该是 -years old;if your age is ranging from 18 to 25 years old please join us.Are you good at singing?Will you help children swim;and I believe you are the one with us;please contact with us.the telephone number is…差不多就这样把！你要加油啊！

Answer 2

你好，下面是我的一些意见：
这部分是我认为有错的地方：
Do you age from 18 to 25 years? -->Are you aged from 18 to 25 ? (age 有“长大，变老”的意思，但是这种用法我不认同)
If your ranging in age from 18 to 25 years will join us.--> If you are ,you can join us.(这句话有点问题，我简单改了哈)
Do you good at singing ? -->Are you good at singing? （语法错误）
这句是我认为可能有错误的：
If you meet the above conditions join us!--> If you meet the above conditions you can join us!
（虽然前后主语一致，但是我不确定是否能够省略）