Question

我崇拜的偶像英语作文 80（-120）个词 初一、初二水平 最好是歌坛明星 无语法错

Answer 1

Hello my name is Peter, my idol is Lee Hom, he is a Taiwan singer, I call him Lao Wang, also called him brother wang. Because I feel it will more cordial. Why I like him so? Because he is very handsome very sunny. And she sings very well, he sings "descendants of the dragon", "change", are very nice. Finally, he sings very well, speak English fluently is standard. His several advantages, is worthy of my learning.

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你是说王力宏吧
这篇文章我在网上见过
但比较难，还行
但是比较长
O(∩_∩)O谢谢你给我缩短了
并且稍微降低了难度
只是有一个明显的错误啊
And she sings very well, he sings "descendants of the dragon", "change", are very nice.
王力宏是男的，不是女的
里面有没有语法错(⊙o⊙)？

Answer 2

Idol worshipping is not a new phenomenon, but the recent cases of unreasonable behaviors conducted by some young people have made it a focus of attention again. Especially, a young girl's father has committed suicide just to wake up his daughter who is possessed by the idea of following her idol wherever he goes. Some people argue that the mass media is to blame for the tragedy. The media always show a picture of glamorous movie stars, pop singers and all the other entertainers. They represent a lifestyle that young people desire to have. While the young people are just not mature enough to distinguish the reality from the dream. Other people believe that it shows the weakness of our educational system. The school pays much attention on their studies and exams, while overlooks their psychological status. As far as I am concerned, the tragedy sends out an alarm signal to us all. The media, the school, the parents and even the youth themselves have to reflect on the issue and try to stop such kind of tragedy from happening again.望采纳

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O(∩_∩)O谢谢，我是一个初一学生
生词好多
能否简单些
并且你写的是谁
我都看不懂
怎么能理解和运用呢
(⊙o⊙)？
不过O(∩_∩)O谢谢

Answer 3

方法错了，思维方法。最崇拜的是自己，才有希望。整天追爱因斯坦啦，明星啦，没戏的。不信就算了。

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很对不起
这是一篇考试作文
所以我需要
写的必须是明星
这是题目要求
我说的很清楚
虽然你说的对
但是
你不符合我的需求
我并不会采纳
不过
还是O(∩_∩)O谢谢