Question

请英语大神帮忙改动一下下面几个英语句子，用比较好的词，让其变动更好，下面有一个例子参照。谢谢

•例如：Ecological imbalance is the biggest threat tothe survival of wild animals and plants. 改为：Ecological imbalance threatens the survival of wild animals andplants.1The Summer Palace is oneof the biggest and oldest parks in China. In the park, there are many famous architectures which make it quiet different from other parks.2. There is aplace where dreams of remote paradise are transformed into reality. 3.Nanking’s climate is markedby intense dry heat during summer months, the origin of its reputation as oneof the “five furnaces of the Yangtze River”. (提示：forceful verb: earn; 被动变主动语态)4. Therewas thesharp slope of a cliff. 5. Itis a small mountain village surrounded by a clear river which is windingthrough a deep valley, with willows along its banks. (提示：用river做主语变换句式）

全部的财富值了，帮帮忙 ，谢谢

Answer 1

1. The famous architectures, which are in the Summer Palace, make it quite different from other parks in China.

2. There is a place to transform dreams of remote paradise into reality.

3. Nanking's climate makes it earn the reputation as one of the "five furnaces of the Yangtze River".

4. There was a sharp slope on the cliff.

5. A clear river, which is winding through a deep vally, surrounds the small mountain village.

Answer 2

it is a small mountain villiage surrouded by a clear river which is winding through a deep valley,with willows along its banks===A clear river,which is winding through
There is a place where dreams of remote paradise are transformed into reality==Dreams of remote paradise transform into reality.Nanking's climate is maked by intense dry heat during the summer months ,the origin of its reputation as one of the five furnaces of the Yangtze River=Intesne dry heat makes Nanking's climate during the summer mounth,the orign of its reputation as one of the five furnaces of the Yangtze River