Question

短文改错．．．

Mary works at a bank.She begin working at eight o'clock
in the morning.She stops working on five o'clock in the afternoon.
At five o'clock the bank closes.Everybody goes to home.
Sone people drive home.Some people ake the train.Some
peoples take the bus.Mary walks home.She likes to walk.
She walks,and walks,or walks.
Mary lives eight miles from the bank.She walks for therr hour.
At eight o'clock in the evening,Mary is home tired.
She is eighty-two year old．
找错，十处错误．
句子都在一起了．．．

Answer 1

有几个字你打错了哦．．．这是我的答案，正确与否有待考证．．．
呵呵．．
好像你只给9句．．．＾＿＾
begin-begins
on-at
to-/
无
peoples-people
or-AND
hour-hours
去掉TIRED
year-years

在百度搜索一下，这篇改错出现了很多哦．．总感觉你提供的有一些问题．．．
Mary works in a bank.She begins working at eight o'clock in the morning.She stops working at five o'clock in the afternoon.
At five o'clock the bank closes.Everybody goes home.Some people drive home,Some take the train, Others take the bus.Mary walks home.She likes to walk. She walks,walks,and walks.
Mary lives eight miles from the bank.She walks for three hour.
At eight o'clock in the evening,Mary is home.She eats dinner. At ten o'clock she goes to bed.Mary is tired.
She is eighty-two year old

Answer 2

Mary works at a bank.She begin（s） working at eight o'clock
in the morning.She stops working on（at） five o'clock in the afternoon.
At five o'clock the bank closes.Everybody goes to（删） home.
Some people drive home.Some people take the train.Some
peoples（people） take the bus.Mary walks home.She likes to walk.
She walks,and walks,or（and） walks.
Mary lives eight miles （加away）from the bank.She walks for three hour（s）.
At eight o'clock in the evening,Mary is （加at）home （加and）tired.
She is eighty-two year（s） old．

大概是这样的，你其中有几个拼写错误我直接给你改了