Question

帮我修改一下英语作文

用中文代替的是不会的单词，帮我顺便帮我添加 题目是我的家庭 I have a warm family.There are three people in it.My father,my mother and me.My father is a engineer.He works in a company.He has big eyes,a beautiful nose,a big mouth.My mother is a teacher.She works in a kindergarden.She is very kind to me.
Every morning,my mother wakes up first.Then she wakes me up.And then my father wakes.But I still want to sleep.We quickly eat breakfast and they go to work,I go to school.School over,I go home by bike.When I get home,I sniff sweet smelling.原来是（用英语怎么说）my mother把晚饭做好了.We have supper.It tastes good.Sometimes,my father tell a joke make us laugh.At night,my mother help me do my home work. I love my family.
请哪位帮我修改一下，哪里有错的纠正过来，最好加点什么东西。我赶时间，只限1个小时。谢谢。速度快的很有几率成为答案。

Answer 1

My Family
There are three people in (my family):My father,my mother and me.My father is (an) engineer.He works in a company.He has big eyes,a beautiful nose (and a wide mouth).My mother is a teacher.She works in a kindergarden.She is very kind to me.
Every morning,my mother (gets up) first.Then she wakes me up.And then my father (also gets up).But I still (feel tired).We eat breakfast (quickly) and (my parents) go to work,I go to school.(At the end of class),I go home by bike.(As soon as) I get home,I sniff sweet smelling.Oh my mother (has prepared the supper).Then we have supper.It tastes so delicious.Sometimes,my father (break a jest) and make us laugh.At night,my mother
(helps) me do my homework. I love my family.
括号是我修改添加的地方。

Answer 2

It was as it is now原来是
have make the super把晚饭做好了
其他的挺好的

Answer 3

I have a warm family.There are three people in it.My father,my mother and me.My father is a engineer.He works in a company.He has big eyes,a beautiful nose,加上个and a big mouth.My mother is a teacher.She works in a kindergarden.She is very kind to me.
Every morning,my mother wakes up first.Then she wakes me up.And then my father wakes.But I still want to sleep.下一句应该是We eat breakfast quickly and they go to work,I go to school.下一句应该是after school.I go home by bike.When I get home,I sniff sweet smelling.Oh!my mother had finished supper.We have supper.It tastes good.Sometimes,my father tell a joke 后面加to make us laugh.At night,my mother help me do my home work. I love my family.
大概是把

Answer 4

an engineer/ when the schoo is over/ it is my mother, she already get dinner ready.

Answer 5

My family

I have a warm family. There are three people in it. My father,my mother and I. My father is an engineer who works for a company. He has big eyes, a beautiful nose and a big mouth. My mother is a teacher who works at a kindergarten. She is very kind to me.

Every morning, my mother would get up first, then she would wake me up, and finally my father would wake. But I usually want to go back to sleep. We would quickly eat breakfast and they would go to work, and I would go to school. When school finishes, I would go home on my bicycle. When I get home, I would smell a delicious aroma from my mothers cooking. We would have supper, and it usually tastes good. Sometimes,my father would tell jokes and make us laugh. At night, my mother would help me do my home work. I love my family.

注：如果不是一次性的，动词前面要加 would