Question

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A few weeks ago a newspaper quized some young girls in school."Do you think you are fat?" More than a half girls gave the positive answer even if most of them looked very normally.

Lily is a senior student who looks a little fat but very healthy.She was dubbed "small pig" by her classmates who thought that it is a kindly nickname.But Lily doesn't think so.She has been fed up with it a long time and treated the nickname as an irony for that implies she is as fat as a pig! So she got under way to lose weight to get rid of the harassment.

At first she knew that there is a kind of surgery can help her get thin,which is very costly and has a lot of down sides.It is inadvisable for her,she thought. After that,she found an advert from the newspaper that there is a kind of drug as the auxiliary therapy can helps people lose weight quickly.

Alike finding the silver bullet, she rush to the shopping mall to buy it.After running out this tablets,she has lost 10 kilogrammes successfully and possessed a satisfiable stature and gave all her classmates a startling alteration.

But she also felt bleak frequently.The doctor told to her that this drug is taboo in medically and it can lead up to chronic angina when she is elderly. If she continues to eat it, it may cause deadly results.Though she is thin now , it's unenviable for her.Lily get no beneficial from her beauty but despaired for losing weight.

Good flavours still attracts her like a megnet.She now understands that losing weight must count on exercising and we should watch out for wonder-drug hype during daily life.
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Answer 1

几个星期前在新闻报刊上出了道题目问那些年轻的在上学的女孩子们“你觉得你们胖么？” 多于一半的女孩说是的即使她们看起来很正常。
利利是个准备毕业的学生，她看起来有点胖可是很健康，班上的同学管她做小猪，可是她非常不喜欢，然后她决定减肥来去掉这样烦人的绰号。

一开始她知道有一种手术能帮她减肥。可是很贵又很多副作用，她觉得不好，然后她看到一些新闻报刊里面刊登了一种很快减肥的药

就像找到银子弹似的，她很快的去商店买了，当她吃过了药以后她很快的成功减了10公斤，让同学们看她的改变

可是她感到凄凉， 医生说如果她还继续用这些药物，会导致以后老的时候有慢性心绞痛 或者很坏的结果。 虽然现在她很瘦， 可是不值得羡慕 利利没有得到任何好处

好的东西都很吸引她， 她现在明白了减肥一定要多做运动 还有我们要小心用药