英语句子改错,请求附加简单解答(急急急,在线等,好再加分)

1.lihuaisanexcellentstudents.Shelivesnearher2.school.Onenight,thewindowwasblowingthew... 1.li hua is an excellent students.She lives near her 2.school. One night,the window was blowing the window very 3.strongly that the noise woke him up.She knew a heavy rain 4.would soon arrive.Think of her classroom,she got up and 5.rushed out into the dark.The strong wind made difficult 6.for her to go forward quickly.In spite of this,she got to her 7.classroom and open the door.All the windows were open,8.and the strong wind was filled the classroom with great noise.9.Quickly she shuts up all the windows.Just then it began to 10. rain heavy.When she got home,it was aleady three. 展开
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1. students → student
Li Hua是一个人,student当然用单数形式

2. very → so (另:wind错打成window了)
和后面的that构成固定句型:so...that...“如此...以至于...”

3. him → her
Li Hua是一个女生,不是男性

4. Think → Thinking
此处用现在分词thinking引导原因状语(主语she和think之间为主动关系),而不能用动词原形think

5. made和difficult中间加入it
使役动词made后面不能直接加宾语补足语difficult,而其后的不定式to go forward为真正的宾语,所以必须用it放入其中做形式宾语

6. 此行无错

7. open → opened
和前面的got to做并列谓语,都用过去式

8. filled → filling
the wind和fill之间为主动关系,不是被动关系

9. shuts → shut
上下文都采用了过去时,所以用shut的过去式shut

10. heavy → heavily
形容词heavy不能修饰动词rain,必须改用副词heavily

参考资料: 英语牛人团

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句子顺序看不清
1.students改成student,前面有an,是单数
2.her改成the,用the特指,不是她的学校,是特指学校
3.第一个windown改成wind,是风吹,very改成so,固定单配so... that如此...以至于...
4.arrive改成come(这道题目不太清楚,但要下雨了基本用come)
5.think改成thinking,这里是一个句子,按照后面主语是she,前面应该是she thought ..,用动名词的主动形态,thinking
6.made后面要加it,make it +形容词,这类单配是固定的,make还可以用find之类的词代替
7.open改成opened,and的前后时态一致,前面过去时,后面也是过去式opened
8.was去掉,be filled with sth或fill sth with sth
9.shut改成shut,过去时
10.heavy改成heavily,副词修饰动词,形容词不能
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1, students => student
2, window was => wind was; very => so
3, him => her
4, Think => Thinking
5, difficult => difficulties
6, to go => in going
7, open the door => opened the door
8, filled => filling
9, shuts => shut
10, heavy => heavily
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1。 students改为student
2。 very 改为so
3. a去掉
4。think 改为thinking
5.made 和 difficult 之间加上it
6。and前面的 open 改为opened
8 应为the strong wind filled the classroom with great noise
9 shuts 改为shut
10 heavy 改为heavely
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li hua is an excellent student.She lives near her school.One night,the wind was blowing the window to strongly that the noise woke her up.She knew a heavy rain would arrive soon.Thinking of her classroom,she got up and rushed out into the dark.The strong wind made it difficult for her to go forward quickly.In spite of this,she got to her classroom and opened the door.All the windows has been open and the strong wind filled the classroom with great noise.Quickly she shut up all the windows.Just then it began to rain heavily.When she got home,it was aleady three.
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1、students 改为student
2、window 改为 win
3、him 改为 her
4、Think 改成 Thinking
5、正确
6、去掉quickly
7、were open 改成 were opened
8、the classroom 前加 into
9、shuts 改成 shut
10、heavy 改成 heavily
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